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8/24/2010 c1 Elber of Torou
Nice. I like the way you created tension in this, first by starting right in the heart of the action, then later by delaying the Representative's response. The "appetites" of the aliens was perhaps a little predictable, but it was still funny to hear a roboticised voice say 'crap'. I look forward to reading more of your work.
7/9/2010 c1 12elisefey
Very amusing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

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