
9/13/2010 c1 truthisalie
She's such a good girl even though all she wants to do is
Scream 'fuck' at the sky. So loudly that all the neighbors will wonder "What
Has gotten into that child?"
I loved this part. Reminds me of myself.
Amazing poem.
She's such a good girl even though all she wants to do is
Scream 'fuck' at the sky. So loudly that all the neighbors will wonder "What
Has gotten into that child?"
I loved this part. Reminds me of myself.
Amazing poem.
7/12/2010 c1
20Minor Masterpiece
From the point of view of somebody with an eating disorder, this was beautiful. I loved the second verse the most, it really captures the most even though it was the most simple. Beautiful work.
-Mea

From the point of view of somebody with an eating disorder, this was beautiful. I loved the second verse the most, it really captures the most even though it was the most simple. Beautiful work.
-Mea
7/11/2010 c1
16Long Island Iced Tea
What can I say? I'm simply a fan of your writing, basking in how real, how beautiful, how poignant it can be.

What can I say? I'm simply a fan of your writing, basking in how real, how beautiful, how poignant it can be.
7/9/2010 c1
84tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
I liked the way you wrote this, and I'm sorry you feel this way. If you need to talk, feel free to PM me any time.
and if that's weird, just ignore it. I hope you feel better. =]

I liked the way you wrote this, and I'm sorry you feel this way. If you need to talk, feel free to PM me any time.
and if that's weird, just ignore it. I hope you feel better. =]