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9/29/2010 c1 Ryhona
I was wondering what kind of inspiration would dole out this kind of a story! (Now I know it's for school...) I thought it was great in the grammatical aspects, but since I'm not very connected to the Japanese side of the world, I have no clue about that stuff. The ending was realistic enough for me... (which is great because I'm starting to hate happy endings)
7/28/2010 c1 Warmglow
I really enjoyed the writing, it was great. I love how this takes place at night, in mere minutes, yet there was so much detail, so much reason as to why she did what she did.

I enjoyed it because, to the shogun it was just another assassin. But to Emiko it was a chance, and to Kando it was a loss.
7/9/2010 c1 Datarin
The phrasing on the first few lines of dialogue seems pretty clunky and might need rephrasing. Or you could instead put the "her head bowed, etc etc" in front of the dialogue.

Other than that, cookies for doing research and keep it up.

- Datarin

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