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7/10/2010 c1 18Open your eyes Chopstick
it was interesting. It sounded a bit choppy, but that's okay. It worked. The poem idea isn't new, but i liked the first stanza. Compared to the rest of the poem, the first stanza was really unique and gave the poetic feel. Anyways, good job with this.

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