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7/11/2010 c1 iwanttobeforeveryoung
That was really good. I liked the whimsical feel to it. :)
7/11/2010 c1 124in theory
I love the rhythm here, it's very well established, it literally bounces. I also liked the whimsical, almost fairy-tale quality of it, it hinted at deeper meanings without being sodden with them. Nice job :)

Jack
7/11/2010 c1 11HiddenFromYou
This was interesting. I liked how it felt like a children's poem for adults (if that makes sense) with the simple language used in quite a sophisticated way.

I didn't like that the message in the poem was so hard to see. I'm sure there's a deeper meaning than food poisoning, but I can't see it.

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