8/30/2010 c8 the strange child
i know luke is an ass but, he's my fav character still, love this story please continue it!

8/8/2010 c6 Keela1221
Wow, this is great! Luke is kinda an ass though, I hope he mellows out! Poor Vincent.

7/21/2010 c3 Sara-bara
Hmm! Interesting story. :D The idea is a unique one that I haven't seen before, which is awesome (who doesn't love fresh plot lines?). The story is developing at a decent speed and has a good structure. I really want to know what Luke's full story is behind all of that anger; he intrigues me.

A suggestion: You could describe settings more. I mean, feel free to leave pleanty to the imagination of the reader, but have a bit more description.

I love your stories! Never stop writing! ;) (And I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter.)

7/14/2010 c1 me
yea, it sounds totally good, i really look forward to when and if you write this