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11/11/2010 c3

5River Trust
ow wonderful

7/26/2010 c2

4TK Anez
This was a good chapter! I like how it focused on the narrative and internal thoughts. Keep writing!

7/17/2010 c2

2Cat Townsend
I really like this story! I do agree that the second chapter is a little loose, and could use some fine tuning, but I really did like the track. I'd like to know what pulled her away.

I can't wait until the next one goes up!

7/17/2010 c2

8kake123
this is really good, keep it up =)

btw, how do you add an authors note to your stories?

thanks

7/16/2010 c1

4TK Anez
This is really good, I can't wait to read more and see where the boy and girl wind up. The images of orange leaves at the beginning was great! Maybe you could read my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion on it :)

7/15/2010 c1

1Guardian0Angel
Seems like a nice story. =]