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9/17/2010 c1 21RentBoheme
Wow, great poem! I really like how you formatted it. It gave a sense that the narrator's thoughts were jumbled. I also liked how you only put a period at the very end. It gave the whole story a stream-of-consciousness kind of feel-like the poem was just thought flowing from the narrator's mind. Well done!

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