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8/29/2012 c1 Pseudonym59
Aw, Mickey's quite obvious with his attempts at wooing Ella.
6/19/2012 c10 Preposterous
A realistic, unhappy ending. I'm torn.
6/19/2012 c4 Preposterous
Awww! Mickey is so cute!
6/19/2012 c2 Preposterous
Haha! I love all the one-liners in this chapter.
1/7/2012 c10 inactive-2105
I love the original ending. I've read so many romance stories where a couple meets, falls in love, has a fight, then gets back together and lives happily ever after. Not that that's a bad thing, but it gets kind of boring and repetitive after awhile. So I definitely enjoyed reading this and am glad you wrote it. Good work :)
9/7/2011 c1 the red apple
Omg i love love love it! U are awesome! U are a genius, and the original ending was better cz it was more realistic. Keep it up! Ima check out more of ur stories now :D
8/21/2011 c9 moonshower
Call me a romantic and all but I love the happy sappy ending.. :) Mm-Hmm..
8/17/2011 c10 1preppychiq03
the original ending is kinda sad :( talking about Ella getting pregnant of Victor's kid :/
8/17/2011 c1 1ForeverGreen17
How is this so good? Keep up the awsome work! Looking forward to the story! =)
7/29/2011 c9 little.artist
I don't like stories with the guy falling in love with a chick way older than him, or vice versa. I detest stories even more when there is a dramatic scene where the exes find out they have a kid.

But I loved, loved, LOVED this story! I can't believe it only has 28 reviews! :O Seriously: Mickey is to die for and even though Ella pissed me off for avoiding Mickey quite a few times, the characters are still wonderful. This story made me feel like I was a part of it, and I was on the edge of my seat for every sec of that suspense.

'She's almost out of my life, he realized. "Ella, come back, please!"' That part made me teary-eyed. So yeah, great job! :D
7/19/2011 c9 witeaya
why on earth this story is not getting more reviews?

i love it!

even if there were some cliche moments here and there it's still great.

but honestly kelly's appearance was not a surprise. to me at least.when u wrote about ella abrupt christmas goodbye it was kinda obvious.

love their moments especially in the earlier chapters. but still 16 is too young.
7/7/2011 c9 1preppychiq03
one of the best story you ever had. next to flaw! keep on writing! =D
6/4/2011 c9 Padfoot for President
Loved it! (:
5/31/2011 c9 1Luv1997bird
I gotta question, does mickey and Ella end up together or are they having an affair thingy again? J.W. lol my brain is gone i think lol.
5/29/2011 c9 Me
Thanks for the lighthearted read, I enjoyed it. I did get the feeling you were attempting to write a passionate romance based on lust, which tbh didn't quite comes out. (this is probably because it was a short story, naturally characterisation would be harder). If you don't have the time for character development then you could try working the mystery aspect on one of the mains instead, but because it started from ella's pov then to mickeys, there was no mystery.

However, as a cute little short- it defiantly worked! Thanks:)
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