
7/19/2010 c1 ValentineRose28
i love ur writing style. great job
i love ur writing style. great job
7/19/2010 c8
4bookwormhottie
Holy Jesus!
Is it his kid? Am I just being dense and not noticing the last name link? Are you writing a sequel? Will you please at least let me know whether or not that's his kid? Please!

Holy Jesus!
Is it his kid? Am I just being dense and not noticing the last name link? Are you writing a sequel? Will you please at least let me know whether or not that's his kid? Please!
7/19/2010 c8 gtac810
10/10! it was a very nice piece. the kind that keeps you glued up to the end, that you simply cant put down until you finish it. cant wait for an epilogue!(please have one!)
10/10! it was a very nice piece. the kind that keeps you glued up to the end, that you simply cant put down until you finish it. cant wait for an epilogue!(please have one!)
7/19/2010 c1 jesragz
Epilogue epilogue epilogue! Im confused, is that their kid? It has to be but you never mentioned their last names. I hope with all my heart that you write an epilogue. This was a beautiful and wonderful story. =)
Epilogue epilogue epilogue! Im confused, is that their kid? It has to be but you never mentioned their last names. I hope with all my heart that you write an epilogue. This was a beautiful and wonderful story. =)
7/18/2010 c8
5jaliwo
Really liked this story. Agree with the other reviewr that an epilogue would be good. I liked how even though it was short it portrayed a wide variety of emotions and character development. Great job.

Really liked this story. Agree with the other reviewr that an epilogue would be good. I liked how even though it was short it portrayed a wide variety of emotions and character development. Great job.
7/18/2010 c1
3floatingintheclouds
This is totally and incredibly amazing! I hope that you write an epilogue at least to conclude the story! It was short and sweet and I loved it!

This is totally and incredibly amazing! I hope that you write an epilogue at least to conclude the story! It was short and sweet and I loved it!
7/18/2010 c8 ccc
For someone who is almost loosing hope to find true love, this love story makes me want to believe again :) It reminds you that true love does defy norms. That true love is erratic and complicated but it surprises you as well because when you least expects it, true love can be found in the most unexpected places :) thank you for keeping that hope alive :)
For someone who is almost loosing hope to find true love, this love story makes me want to believe again :) It reminds you that true love does defy norms. That true love is erratic and complicated but it surprises you as well because when you least expects it, true love can be found in the most unexpected places :) thank you for keeping that hope alive :)
7/18/2010 c8
7jinx89
Where are the reviews on this? I sincerely hope that they just haven't registered on here yet because you deserve about a million reviews (good reviews, though)! This was really good. Short but...well, amazing. I want to ask for more but at the same time it's such a nice way of ending it. So if you ever write an epilogue or something of the sorts, I will be ecstatic to read it! Thanks for the awesome read! :)

Where are the reviews on this? I sincerely hope that they just haven't registered on here yet because you deserve about a million reviews (good reviews, though)! This was really good. Short but...well, amazing. I want to ask for more but at the same time it's such a nice way of ending it. So if you ever write an epilogue or something of the sorts, I will be ecstatic to read it! Thanks for the awesome read! :)