for Easy As Breathing5/16/2011 c1 
21songbirdalice
The style is odd, but I can adjust to it. Your structure is off, it's like you wrote a paragraph then pressed enter so that it looked like a poem. Other than that it is pretty good :)
21songbirdaliceThe style is odd, but I can adjust to it. Your structure is off, it's like you wrote a paragraph then pressed enter so that it looked like a poem. Other than that it is pretty good :)
7/18/2010 c1 Spiral-Girl
I really like this poem. But im not really sure why. I think its got good rhythm and uses intriguing words. Its kinda spellbinding
I really like this poem. But im not really sure why. I think its got good rhythm and uses intriguing words. Its kinda spellbinding