for Friends Don't Let Friends Play for the Yankees1/12/2011 c21 
2LostLikeTearsInRain
Great job on this story, I really enjoyed reading it :D Thank you for writing and posting!
2LostLikeTearsInRainGreat job on this story, I really enjoyed reading it :D Thank you for writing and posting!
1/8/2011 c18 6EmmaWoodhouse88
Thats so sad. Her poor family. And all of them have someone there for them but her mother. I hope things start to work out better soon.
6EmmaWoodhouse88Thats so sad. Her poor family. And all of them have someone there for them but her mother. I hope things start to work out better soon.
1/8/2011 c18 mihaela
sorry fo the late review,but this chapter made me cry, keep up with the good work
sorry fo the late review,but this chapter made me cry, keep up with the good work
1/7/2011 c18 RockFan
That chapter broke my heart! Poor Killian! I hated it when her dad died! My eyes were all watery and stuff (okay, so I cried!).
I'm glad Declan and Killian are trying to be friends again. I love that you've made it such a difficult journey for best friends to transition to lovers and not something easy. It makes it realistic and more believeable.
Sorry that this story is almost finished but I will be sure to read it over and over again!
That chapter broke my heart! Poor Killian! I hated it when her dad died! My eyes were all watery and stuff (okay, so I cried!).
I'm glad Declan and Killian are trying to be friends again. I love that you've made it such a difficult journey for best friends to transition to lovers and not something easy. It makes it realistic and more believeable.
Sorry that this story is almost finished but I will be sure to read it over and over again!
1/7/2011 c17 RockFan
Lots to think about in this chapter! And scary about her dad. The New York car would piss me off, too (not a Yankees fan).
Off to read next chapter.
Lots to think about in this chapter! And scary about her dad. The New York car would piss me off, too (not a Yankees fan).
Off to read next chapter.
12/8/2010 c16 echo-echo
The story is adorable. It has the perfect amount of drama and reality to it. I had an issue with how polite everyone seemed, apologizing after everything, but that I realized that's probably normal. That's how I would go about it anyway. I can't wait to see how it wraps up, and good luck this next month. Happy Holidays.
The story is adorable. It has the perfect amount of drama and reality to it. I had an issue with how polite everyone seemed, apologizing after everything, but that I realized that's probably normal. That's how I would go about it anyway. I can't wait to see how it wraps up, and good luck this next month. Happy Holidays.
12/7/2010 c16 DinaY
This is amazing, I couldn't stop reading it! I just had to read it until the last updated chapter before reviewing. I feel like Declan is an asshole.. I also get a weird feeling that he will "fire" her :/ Although that might not happen at all..
Keagan is amazing! I wish my brother was like that! Random question, how do you pronounce her name, is it Kill Ian? But together kind of thing.. :s
I can't wait for the next update!
Happy Holidays!
-dina
This is amazing, I couldn't stop reading it! I just had to read it until the last updated chapter before reviewing. I feel like Declan is an asshole.. I also get a weird feeling that he will "fire" her :/ Although that might not happen at all..
Keagan is amazing! I wish my brother was like that! Random question, how do you pronounce her name, is it Kill Ian? But together kind of thing.. :s
I can't wait for the next update!
Happy Holidays!
-dina
12/6/2010 c16 6EmmaWoodhouse88
Wow. They argue a lot. I hope her dad is ok. I bet this helps her and decline get along again. I can't wait to see what happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88Wow. They argue a lot. I hope her dad is ok. I bet this helps her and decline get along again. I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/6/2010 c16 1checkyesdana
what a super intense two chapters. Lots of saddness. Make them happy soon please. And Killians dad needs to be okay!
1checkyesdanawhat a super intense two chapters. Lots of saddness. Make them happy soon please. And Killians dad needs to be okay!
11/8/2010 c14 59builtonbones
What IS it about baseball players that make them so difficult? I personally love this story, I can relate in a few aspects like being in love with a baseball player who can't admit or commit to his feelings, as well as a love of the red sox. Except my baseball player is a die hard yankees fan, le sigh. I really like how when you write about Killian, people don't constantly have to say she's pretty or beautiful, you naturally assume it by the way you present her and how she talks. I really do love Declan but I wish he'd just admit his love of Killian already! I'm like aching for them to finally be together as well as seeing how things will be with him as a yankees player. I also like how Kill knows they're the best friend cliche. I really can't wait to see how this progresses.
59builtonbonesWhat IS it about baseball players that make them so difficult? I personally love this story, I can relate in a few aspects like being in love with a baseball player who can't admit or commit to his feelings, as well as a love of the red sox. Except my baseball player is a die hard yankees fan, le sigh. I really like how when you write about Killian, people don't constantly have to say she's pretty or beautiful, you naturally assume it by the way you present her and how she talks. I really do love Declan but I wish he'd just admit his love of Killian already! I'm like aching for them to finally be together as well as seeing how things will be with him as a yankees player. I also like how Kill knows they're the best friend cliche. I really can't wait to see how this progresses.