for Taking Eden8/4/2010 c12 
211cina24
Ohgodd that was VERY descriptive. How the hell is their relationship going to from there? What about mike? Pfnalxjwkbxyszbsl, I'm freaking flaberghasted!
This is too much to take in. Hold on while I spaz out...
HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING NATURE! SHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT, lol, what did your friends think of this sex chapter? And how in the heck would you know a these thing, experiance maybe? Bahah, wow is all I have to say.
211cina24Ohgodd that was VERY descriptive. How the hell is their relationship going to from there? What about mike? Pfnalxjwkbxyszbsl, I'm freaking flaberghasted!
This is too much to take in. Hold on while I spaz out...
HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING NATURE! SHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT, lol, what did your friends think of this sex chapter? And how in the heck would you know a these thing, experiance maybe? Bahah, wow is all I have to say.
8/4/2010 c11 11cina24
I adore Eden!(:
She's awesome.
Ooh seems like Zach is going to try harder to gain that relationship/dating thing that Eden is trying so hard to deny...
Can't wait for the next chappie
I adore Eden!(:
She's awesome.
Ooh seems like Zach is going to try harder to gain that relationship/dating thing that Eden is trying so hard to deny...
Can't wait for the next chappie
8/3/2010 c10 Brendy
ugh, ok i seriously have had enough love triangles and a love square is more than i have patience for. cant you just keep it eden/zach and find some original drama for the two to spice it up?
ugh, ok i seriously have had enough love triangles and a love square is more than i have patience for. cant you just keep it eden/zach and find some original drama for the two to spice it up?
8/3/2010 c10 4L. Valdez
OH! Well, I hope she ends up with Zach... but...
I would love to add Raul to the mix, so he's my vote!
4L. ValdezOH! Well, I hope she ends up with Zach... but...
I would love to add Raul to the mix, so he's my vote!
8/3/2010 c10 Makayla
Zach
Zach
8/3/2010 c10 reid
Zach. of course u know how i feel about that haha
Zach. of course u know how i feel about that haha
8/2/2010 c9 11cina24
I vote for MIKE!(;
He's the bombdiggity:D
Screw Zach,lol.
Ooh you should ask everyone in the next chapter who they would vote for, zach or mike?
Normally if you tell them there is a poll, you won't get as many people voting.
But yeaa, gahh I love this story. It's awesome(:
Mike should hang out with her more.
Oh I have an idea!
Okay, so one day Eden goes to the gangs house or whatever, Zach is in his room, n Eden and Mike are talking, blah blah blah, then Zach comes out right when Eden agrees to hang out with Mike or something. Zach gets pissed and rebutals et ctera, then Eden yells at him justifiying that she can hang out with anyone she wants and Mike is her friend, blah. Anywhoo that's what I got so far, haha.
Good chapter.
I vote for MIKE!(;
He's the bombdiggity:D
Screw Zach,lol.
Ooh you should ask everyone in the next chapter who they would vote for, zach or mike?
Normally if you tell them there is a poll, you won't get as many people voting.
But yeaa, gahh I love this story. It's awesome(:
Mike should hang out with her more.
Oh I have an idea!
Okay, so one day Eden goes to the gangs house or whatever, Zach is in his room, n Eden and Mike are talking, blah blah blah, then Zach comes out right when Eden agrees to hang out with Mike or something. Zach gets pissed and rebutals et ctera, then Eden yells at him justifiying that she can hang out with anyone she wants and Mike is her friend, blah. Anywhoo that's what I got so far, haha.
Good chapter.
8/1/2010 c6 reid
lol yeah i like it alot better, the other way was just too rushed
lol yeah i like it alot better, the other way was just too rushed
8/1/2010 c8 11cina24
Bahaha I swear, I'm having seconds thoughts about Eden not I'm a gang because she'd sure fit in, lol.
Ahh I love her temper. Good chapter;P
Bahaha I swear, I'm having seconds thoughts about Eden not I'm a gang because she'd sure fit in, lol.
Ahh I love her temper. Good chapter;P
7/31/2010 c7 DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402
ahahahahahaha this is so good :D
please PLEASE please update soon :P
ahahahahahaha this is so good :D
please PLEASE please update soon :P