for The Relationship8/4/2016 c1 Nigeria
absolutely beautiful
of all my years on ficpress
this is the first I've ever reviewed
keep it up
absolutely beautiful
of all my years on ficpress
this is the first I've ever reviewed
keep it up
2/22/2015 c1 Guest
This was so brilliantly cute! It was perfect and realistic and romantic and absolutely spot-on perfection! I loved every second of it!
This was so brilliantly cute! It was perfect and realistic and romantic and absolutely spot-on perfection! I loved every second of it!
9/8/2014 c1 Casey Hope
Just loved it ! There's so many emotions through this text... I really enjoyed it !
Thanks
Casey
Just loved it ! There's so many emotions through this text... I really enjoyed it !
Thanks
Casey
8/20/2012 c1 
2loveofallthatisawesome
This is so amazing! Oh my gosh, I love these two characters. They couldn't be more perfect for each other! All their arguments, their swearing, and their love is so awesome that I just want to die! This is perfection; I love it :D
2loveofallthatisawesomeThis is so amazing! Oh my gosh, I love these two characters. They couldn't be more perfect for each other! All their arguments, their swearing, and their love is so awesome that I just want to die! This is perfection; I love it :D
3/23/2012 c1 The Random Passerby
That's so simple yet...somehow deep. It touched me. It is so realistic and believable. I so frickin love it.
You don't make their character shallow and perfect. It has depth, no-nonsense, and enticing realistic flaws to them. And you make this story to the point without some rubbish to stall it. They are like fire against fire. You make it work. Not to fluffy or mushy, but sweet in twisted way.
Well, keep up the great work dude.
Dee
That's so simple yet...somehow deep. It touched me. It is so realistic and believable. I so frickin love it.
You don't make their character shallow and perfect. It has depth, no-nonsense, and enticing realistic flaws to them. And you make this story to the point without some rubbish to stall it. They are like fire against fire. You make it work. Not to fluffy or mushy, but sweet in twisted way.
Well, keep up the great work dude.
Dee
7/8/2011 c1 2bookhugger
I loved this one-shot...especially how you grouped each section by the stages of a relationship. You made me love the characters through and through. :) And I absolutely loved the story too. Great job!
2bookhuggerI loved this one-shot...especially how you grouped each section by the stages of a relationship. You made me love the characters through and through. :) And I absolutely loved the story too. Great job!
2/22/2011 c1 3despite-the-protest
Adorable. The cussing was a bit repetitive and annoying but I think it added to their character. ;) Good job!
3despite-the-protestAdorable. The cussing was a bit repetitive and annoying but I think it added to their character. ;) Good job!
2/16/2011 c1 Ellie Nelson
This is an unbelievably sweet one-shot. I love the interaction between the characters - it was understated in a good, realistic way, and the way your main characters sort of "click" together is perfect and completely cute.
I love this format, too, where you jump forward in key scenes in their relationship - not necessarily the "big events," but just moments that really exemplify how they play off of each each other.
Beautiful! Adding to my favorites. :)
This is an unbelievably sweet one-shot. I love the interaction between the characters - it was understated in a good, realistic way, and the way your main characters sort of "click" together is perfect and completely cute.
I love this format, too, where you jump forward in key scenes in their relationship - not necessarily the "big events," but just moments that really exemplify how they play off of each each other.
Beautiful! Adding to my favorites. :)
8/16/2010 c1 Kalilah
All I can say is Elena is a my new role model for me :D Yeah I loved her, and the whole story.
All I can say is Elena is a my new role model for me :D Yeah I loved her, and the whole story.
8/2/2010 c1 malka
so funny ! love it !
so funny ! love it !
7/31/2010 c1 chel
This is really good. The characters are just so interesting, and their relationship is different than most would expect. I think the only issue is that they might be a little too similar.
This is really good. The characters are just so interesting, and their relationship is different than most would expect. I think the only issue is that they might be a little too similar.