for Lovely, Dark and Deep11/14/2021 c30 Guest
I still re-read this periodically. It's so good! Thanks for writing it!
I still re-read this periodically. It's so good! Thanks for writing it!
1/28/2021 c27 
22Estrellagrace
M. Forthe. I am publicly exposing my love for you and your characters. May we all live in happy matrimony together and i- oH GOD DR. HALL IS OUTO F PRISON OMG OMG WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
22EstrellagraceM. Forthe. I am publicly exposing my love for you and your characters. May we all live in happy matrimony together and i- oH GOD DR. HALL IS OUTO F PRISON OMG OMG WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
1/27/2021 c20 Estrellagrace
Forthe you are a genius. Somehow, you made me like a quote (an impossibility as far as I was concerned) in the chapter about fear with Lemony Snicket, AND...you have ten more chapters to this story? I couldn't imagine what could possibly come next without breaking him out, unlikely, or Charlotte becoming a killer, more likely. Somehow I think you'll surprise me anyway. I still very much dislike how the doctor doesn't let her in on everything about him. Why hold himself back for her to only love a single part of him? It is better for it to be true love than for him to portray a false yet more lovable version of himself. Ah, maybe that was just him getting fussy about his goodbyes. Great work here.
Forthe you are a genius. Somehow, you made me like a quote (an impossibility as far as I was concerned) in the chapter about fear with Lemony Snicket, AND...you have ten more chapters to this story? I couldn't imagine what could possibly come next without breaking him out, unlikely, or Charlotte becoming a killer, more likely. Somehow I think you'll surprise me anyway. I still very much dislike how the doctor doesn't let her in on everything about him. Why hold himself back for her to only love a single part of him? It is better for it to be true love than for him to portray a false yet more lovable version of himself. Ah, maybe that was just him getting fussy about his goodbyes. Great work here.
9/3/2020 c30 2OrangeKiss
Hey, I just want to say that I'm really a fan of this work of yours! It's been 5 years since I first read this story, and I've re-read it a number of times already but it's still amazing as ever. I love how this story unfolded, and how it makes me think so much, haha. I just want to ask - I vaguely remember reading a sequel of some sort years ago, and I read something about Fire and Ice in the first chapter. Was that taken down? I really wanted to read more of Dr. Hall and Charlotte...
Anyway, it was such a pleasure reading this again. Every chapter was intriguing and left me wanting to read more. Thanks for writing this story. I'll most likely re-read this a couple more times in the future, hopefully fictionpress stays alive until then!
2OrangeKissHey, I just want to say that I'm really a fan of this work of yours! It's been 5 years since I first read this story, and I've re-read it a number of times already but it's still amazing as ever. I love how this story unfolded, and how it makes me think so much, haha. I just want to ask - I vaguely remember reading a sequel of some sort years ago, and I read something about Fire and Ice in the first chapter. Was that taken down? I really wanted to read more of Dr. Hall and Charlotte...
Anyway, it was such a pleasure reading this again. Every chapter was intriguing and left me wanting to read more. Thanks for writing this story. I'll most likely re-read this a couple more times in the future, hopefully fictionpress stays alive until then!
12/25/2017 c30 9MaskedNightingale
Wow! Just wow! I loved this psychological story, kept me intrigued and fascinated throughout. It would be one I'd love to have on my shelf one day.
9MaskedNightingaleWow! Just wow! I loved this psychological story, kept me intrigued and fascinated throughout. It would be one I'd love to have on my shelf one day.
7/20/2017 c5 Lovethyneighbor
Type your review Great writing. Kept me , please write more.
Type your review Great writing. Kept me , please write more.
6/22/2017 c30 cretaceous
well i fucking loved this! it's 3:30 am and i just read this start to finish and i'm so glad i did (and so glad i don't have to work tomorrow!) excited to read more of your stories :)
well i fucking loved this! it's 3:30 am and i just read this start to finish and i'm so glad i did (and so glad i don't have to work tomorrow!) excited to read more of your stories :)
5/9/2016 c30 2Roflmao101
I'm sure you've heard this plenty of times, but I genuinely don't know how to feel about this story. This is one twisted roller coaster ride of mind fuckery (pardon my language). I mean this story really challenges your morality. I can see why Charlotte fell in love with Dr. Hall. The compassion and softness that he showed her was really contradictory to his 'hobbies'. I also understand why she was with David.
A part of me wishes she was still with David and lived a normal life. But at the end of the day, she's not a normal person. Part of me is kinda glad she's with Dr. Hall. I mean if she were to live a normal life, eventually, she would have snapped. I think that if she was to continue to be with David; he would have been killed by Charlotte, whether it be an unconscious or conscious action. Or Dr. Hall would have eventually got to him.
So in the ending I'm glad that Charlotte and Dr. Hall are together and away from society so they can't hurt anyone again. Overall, I'm still conflicted. I certainly didn't hate this story at all. I love the way it's written. It's clear that you're a very talented person. It's not often that I come across a story that challenges me and my beliefs. If there's one thing I'm certain of, it's that this is definitely one of my favourite story. What a remarkable job and thank you for sharing!
2Roflmao101I'm sure you've heard this plenty of times, but I genuinely don't know how to feel about this story. This is one twisted roller coaster ride of mind fuckery (pardon my language). I mean this story really challenges your morality. I can see why Charlotte fell in love with Dr. Hall. The compassion and softness that he showed her was really contradictory to his 'hobbies'. I also understand why she was with David.
A part of me wishes she was still with David and lived a normal life. But at the end of the day, she's not a normal person. Part of me is kinda glad she's with Dr. Hall. I mean if she were to live a normal life, eventually, she would have snapped. I think that if she was to continue to be with David; he would have been killed by Charlotte, whether it be an unconscious or conscious action. Or Dr. Hall would have eventually got to him.
So in the ending I'm glad that Charlotte and Dr. Hall are together and away from society so they can't hurt anyone again. Overall, I'm still conflicted. I certainly didn't hate this story at all. I love the way it's written. It's clear that you're a very talented person. It's not often that I come across a story that challenges me and my beliefs. If there's one thing I'm certain of, it's that this is definitely one of my favourite story. What a remarkable job and thank you for sharing!
2/13/2016 c30 Ilsa with an I
I started reading this at 12:30AM and stayed up until 4:30 to finish it. It's my fault for starting to read something so late, but I can't help but blame you for writing something so engrossing that I couldn't just put it down after reading the first chapter. I'm now browsing your other work, and I really hope you end up publishing because you should definitely be profiting from your writing.
I started reading this at 12:30AM and stayed up until 4:30 to finish it. It's my fault for starting to read something so late, but I can't help but blame you for writing something so engrossing that I couldn't just put it down after reading the first chapter. I'm now browsing your other work, and I really hope you end up publishing because you should definitely be profiting from your writing.
9/22/2015 c30 Mydarlinghenri
I change my mind. Please, you must pitch this to Netflix or HBO or to whomever. It's too good to let it languish in fictionpress.
I change my mind. Please, you must pitch this to Netflix or HBO or to whomever. It's too good to let it languish in fictionpress.
9/21/2015 c1 Mydarlinghenri
This was both terrible and beautiful. I want to leave a long-ass review but I think it would end up becoming an essay. This story is so perfect. I kind of want it to see it become a TV show, but I would hate to see anything in it changed. Some parts of it was just poetry that I think it would be difficult to convey those moments visually.
Thank you for writing such a brilliant story.
This was both terrible and beautiful. I want to leave a long-ass review but I think it would end up becoming an essay. This story is so perfect. I kind of want it to see it become a TV show, but I would hate to see anything in it changed. Some parts of it was just poetry that I think it would be difficult to convey those moments visually.
Thank you for writing such a brilliant story.
7/8/2015 c1 1WeepingCrown
Thank you for this amazing story
I'm really happy that I read this, it made me laugh, cry and love... The first time I read this I had to put the story down from time to time (even though i was addicted) because it was playing with my emotions and sanity so much.. And to be honest I'm quite in love with those characters
I love Evander Hall, really, I think he is amazing despite his.. hobby... I love Charlotte, well when she was with David I hated her and strongly disagreed with her but I forgave her the second she chose Evander again, poor Charlotte goes through a lot of things I hope that she will be happy forever with Dr Hall! I love Sam, I love her dad.. And David, poor David, I love him too.. this guy is so unfortunate I'm so sad for him.. but I'm wouldn't change a thing though :/
This story was absolutely fantastic, heart breaking and breath taking! I wish I could buy a physical copy of that book ;)
Thank you so much for sharing this with us because it made me feel so many things :)
1WeepingCrownThank you for this amazing story
I'm really happy that I read this, it made me laugh, cry and love... The first time I read this I had to put the story down from time to time (even though i was addicted) because it was playing with my emotions and sanity so much.. And to be honest I'm quite in love with those characters
I love Evander Hall, really, I think he is amazing despite his.. hobby... I love Charlotte, well when she was with David I hated her and strongly disagreed with her but I forgave her the second she chose Evander again, poor Charlotte goes through a lot of things I hope that she will be happy forever with Dr Hall! I love Sam, I love her dad.. And David, poor David, I love him too.. this guy is so unfortunate I'm so sad for him.. but I'm wouldn't change a thing though :/
This story was absolutely fantastic, heart breaking and breath taking! I wish I could buy a physical copy of that book ;)
Thank you so much for sharing this with us because it made me feel so many things :)
4/8/2015 c30 1Rakkasan Girl
This was a very twisted and interesting ride. You really delved into the psychology of the whole ordeal, and I loved it. I liked the dark spin you put on this and the horror involved. Outstanding job :)
1Rakkasan GirlThis was a very twisted and interesting ride. You really delved into the psychology of the whole ordeal, and I loved it. I liked the dark spin you put on this and the horror involved. Outstanding job :)