for Crushboy from Hell12/21/2013 c1 Guest
I just fell off a cliff after re-reading this. I've read this before but it seems better now tho I think there aren't any changes made.
Haha, I love the viewpoint of the girl. It's cool how Jessica covers up her obsession with snide remarks and how she makes Cliff seem flawed and perfect at the same time.
The writing style is good. There's too much emotion in such a short script. I enjoyed reading this short story. )
I just fell off a cliff after re-reading this. I've read this before but it seems better now tho I think there aren't any changes made.
Haha, I love the viewpoint of the girl. It's cool how Jessica covers up her obsession with snide remarks and how she makes Cliff seem flawed and perfect at the same time.
The writing style is good. There's too much emotion in such a short script. I enjoyed reading this short story. )
12/3/2011 c1 kaymuhray
:o
Omgosh I can't believe you just did that.
That was great, I definitely wasn't expecting the ending. Aww poor Jessica. Well now for the follow up. :D
:o
Omgosh I can't believe you just did that.
That was great, I definitely wasn't expecting the ending. Aww poor Jessica. Well now for the follow up. :D
8/30/2011 c1 
22my poor toaster
Hahahaha!
Lolololololo infinite lol!
:D
That just made my day!
Well night. Its one am.
But still, you get the point.
22my poor toasterHahahaha!
Lolololololo infinite lol!
:D
That just made my day!
Well night. Its one am.
But still, you get the point.
7/7/2011 c1 1preppychiq03
WOW! THE ENDING WAS UNEXPECTED! i totally thought he was confessing for jessica. i can't believe it. at the same time, truth be told but i already experience the same king of thing in the past. :)) i love every story you publish 3
1preppychiq03WOW! THE ENDING WAS UNEXPECTED! i totally thought he was confessing for jessica. i can't believe it. at the same time, truth be told but i already experience the same king of thing in the past. :)) i love every story you publish 3
12/28/2010 c1 8JamieBell
Bahaha, that's hilarious! I love it. Mostly because it's the story of my life! I'm gonna go find the sequel. Great work!
8JamieBellBahaha, that's hilarious! I love it. Mostly because it's the story of my life! I'm gonna go find the sequel. Great work!
8/16/2010 c1 silver rocker1490
wow! that was fucking sick!
wow! that was fucking sick!
8/8/2010 c1 malka
love it. funny!
love it. funny!
7/29/2010 c1 Scribe of Stories
That. Can. Not. Be. The. Ending. No way in hell. Very funny and well written. Follow up, please?
That. Can. Not. Be. The. Ending. No way in hell. Very funny and well written. Follow up, please?
7/25/2010 c1 casakitten
This is so not complete. You tease! Provide us with a follow-up immediately. Please and thank you.
This is so not complete. You tease! Provide us with a follow-up immediately. Please and thank you.
7/24/2010 c1 Hy-c
I actually found this quite funny! deserves a continuation! :)
I actually found this quite funny! deserves a continuation! :)
7/23/2010 c1 Shannon
O...UNFAIR!
O...UNFAIR!
7/22/2010 c1 A.C.Bass
Oh my goodness. That was heartbreaking. Still, it was also very well written and captivating. Good work :)
Oh my goodness. That was heartbreaking. Still, it was also very well written and captivating. Good work :)