for Dear Moron10/22/2011 c16 pbgurl
DAMN! Cliffhanger! Must.know.what.happnes.next! :D
lol! Suzy's statement about Mera teaching her new words was totally random lol! And I like Uncle.
So I'm hoping Jace and Christian go all bada** over the guy that took Mera.
-Liz :D
DAMN! Cliffhanger! Must.know.what.happnes.next! :D
lol! Suzy's statement about Mera teaching her new words was totally random lol! And I like Uncle.
So I'm hoping Jace and Christian go all bada** over the guy that took Mera.
-Liz :D
10/22/2011 c3 pollyspocket
Wow, what a chapter! Very entertaining. Makes you wonder what Christian did to that creeper.
So glad you made this story! And I'm glad I found it. Reading along now haha :)
Wow, what a chapter! Very entertaining. Makes you wonder what Christian did to that creeper.
So glad you made this story! And I'm glad I found it. Reading along now haha :)
10/22/2011 c1 
1xbitemark
What an interesting story! A lot of times when you get on here you see the same thing over and over, but I have never seen anything like this before! Can't wait to read more, this is very well written!
1xbitemarkWhat an interesting story! A lot of times when you get on here you see the same thing over and over, but I have never seen anything like this before! Can't wait to read more, this is very well written!
10/22/2011 c2 pollyspocket
I love this chapter because we finally have Jace and her talking for the first time. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. Your descriptions give me crystal-clear images. :)
I love this chapter because we finally have Jace and her talking for the first time. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. Your descriptions give me crystal-clear images. :)
10/22/2011 c1 pollyspocket
Honestly, I was addicted to this story right when I started it! Great job. I love the idea you've started, I just hope you finish it :)
Honestly, I was addicted to this story right when I started it! Great job. I love the idea you've started, I just hope you finish it :)
10/22/2011 c16 Kalaina D. A. Lynn
I need more! I really need more! I can wait for the update, but please do it soon! p.s. i HATE clifhangers. bye.
I need more! I really need more! I can wait for the update, but please do it soon! p.s. i HATE clifhangers. bye.
8/13/2011 c15 KVARIANT
""Kiss!" Someone suddenly yelled in the middle of their insults. All eyes turned to this person and I couldn't help but smile. I love Christian."
I love Christian too :D 3
This story is so unbearably adorable! Please update soon! XD
""Kiss!" Someone suddenly yelled in the middle of their insults. All eyes turned to this person and I couldn't help but smile. I love Christian."
I love Christian too :D 3
This story is so unbearably adorable! Please update soon! XD
8/13/2011 c14 KVARIANT
Omg, that kiss was EPIC! It gave me happiness all around, but then Christian walked in and... and! Omg, I'm sooo giddy right now XD
Btw; I love this line: ""You know what? I gotta shit...sooo i'll just got the bathroom." Christian explained-"
XD
Omg, that kiss was EPIC! It gave me happiness all around, but then Christian walked in and... and! Omg, I'm sooo giddy right now XD
Btw; I love this line: ""You know what? I gotta shit...sooo i'll just got the bathroom." Christian explained-"
XD
8/13/2011 c12 KVARIANT
Ooh, me and Jace have something in common! We both love Johnny Depp XD He is so honestly epic :)
I like Bruce Willis too, though :D
And omg, this story is just so amazing, I honestly can't do anything but let my mouth drop to the floor and have a surprisingly longs tongue roll out :P
Ooh, me and Jace have something in common! We both love Johnny Depp XD He is so honestly epic :)
I like Bruce Willis too, though :D
And omg, this story is just so amazing, I honestly can't do anything but let my mouth drop to the floor and have a surprisingly longs tongue roll out :P
8/13/2011 c11 KVARIANT
To be quite honest, my brother's always thought of Santa as a pervert! XD But Mera's phobia is honestly scary! And very reasonable... Not to mention hilarious!
And oh my God, I can't believe Susy's mom! How could she commit adultery? More importantly sleep with her daughters' past BOYFRIEND? It's wrong! And dang girl, this book is packed with sex maniac parents :P
Also, I love how she got back at 'em by announcing her pregnancy, but her parents are just way too mean! It's sad, but it also happens to be a compliment on your part because you wrote it so well that I feel honest emotiions for each character .
Plus, I honestly LOVED the way you ended this chapter! :D
To be quite honest, my brother's always thought of Santa as a pervert! XD But Mera's phobia is honestly scary! And very reasonable... Not to mention hilarious!
And oh my God, I can't believe Susy's mom! How could she commit adultery? More importantly sleep with her daughters' past BOYFRIEND? It's wrong! And dang girl, this book is packed with sex maniac parents :P
Also, I love how she got back at 'em by announcing her pregnancy, but her parents are just way too mean! It's sad, but it also happens to be a compliment on your part because you wrote it so well that I feel honest emotiions for each character .
Plus, I honestly LOVED the way you ended this chapter! :D
8/13/2011 c10 KVARIANT
Aw, I hope your family crisis is over by now!
Omg, I can't wait to find out how they're supposed to act as girlfriend and boyfriend! I'm so lucky you've already put up these chapter a long while ago, otherwise I'd be dying here! :)
Aw, I hope your family crisis is over by now!
Omg, I can't wait to find out how they're supposed to act as girlfriend and boyfriend! I'm so lucky you've already put up these chapter a long while ago, otherwise I'd be dying here! :)
8/13/2011 c9 KVARIANT
I'd honestly love to edit your stuff, honestly! But I'm not always able to be on the computer because my parents believe that curriculum is better than life itself.. as you can imagine, it's hard... But I hope you have a good beta by now :)
About the story...
Gosh, I honestly can't believe that Susy is pregnant... that's just so very shocking... O_O But then again, she does sleep with a different guy every month, doesn't she? But still... Wow... I'm at loss for words currently...
Btw: I wanted to mention something about Christian before, but I didn't think it was worth it... Your Christian reminds me so much of someone I know, who also happens to be Christian... Are you a mind reader? :P
I'd honestly love to edit your stuff, honestly! But I'm not always able to be on the computer because my parents believe that curriculum is better than life itself.. as you can imagine, it's hard... But I hope you have a good beta by now :)
About the story...
Gosh, I honestly can't believe that Susy is pregnant... that's just so very shocking... O_O But then again, she does sleep with a different guy every month, doesn't she? But still... Wow... I'm at loss for words currently...
Btw: I wanted to mention something about Christian before, but I didn't think it was worth it... Your Christian reminds me so much of someone I know, who also happens to be Christian... Are you a mind reader? :P
8/13/2011 c7 KVARIANT
Omg, you honestly don't know how grateful I am to your amazing writing ability, and creative head XD Mera and Jace are just so made for each other! :D
Omg, you honestly don't know how grateful I am to your amazing writing ability, and creative head XD Mera and Jace are just so made for each other! :D
8/13/2011 c6 KVARIANT
Sexy Lexi eh? Christian must seriously love that car XD
And I'm so sorry for Dylan, and so sorry that hey had such a terrible fight... And I honestly can't believe that Jace didn't go afetr her! He's so mean, but I still can't help but like him. He's got his reasons *sigh*
Okay, I'm so sorry for randomly rambling! Thanks for writing this, and I'm so going to keep on reading XD!
Sexy Lexi eh? Christian must seriously love that car XD
And I'm so sorry for Dylan, and so sorry that hey had such a terrible fight... And I honestly can't believe that Jace didn't go afetr her! He's so mean, but I still can't help but like him. He's got his reasons *sigh*
Okay, I'm so sorry for randomly rambling! Thanks for writing this, and I'm so going to keep on reading XD!