for Dear Moron4/12/2011 c15 
6Akadrama
Yay cuz u update kinda slow but Im not complaining its not like I check everyday. Anyway it was kinda awkward in the beginning I don't know why and I may have skipped around but that has more to do with me trying to read 10 stories in the free hour i allot myself than it flowing weird which it does, And in beginning it seemed like Jace was all big and bad and now he's not and Mera was kind of cold and aloof but now she's not.Not that I have a problem more so that I know the longer away from the characters you are the less you lose touch with who they truly are.Anyway graet story overall you always manage to keep me engaged.
6AkadramaYay cuz u update kinda slow but Im not complaining its not like I check everyday. Anyway it was kinda awkward in the beginning I don't know why and I may have skipped around but that has more to do with me trying to read 10 stories in the free hour i allot myself than it flowing weird which it does, And in beginning it seemed like Jace was all big and bad and now he's not and Mera was kind of cold and aloof but now she's not.Not that I have a problem more so that I know the longer away from the characters you are the less you lose touch with who they truly are.Anyway graet story overall you always manage to keep me engaged.
4/11/2011 c15 4Pyro Band Ninja
I lovels this! This is AH-MAY-ZING! Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
4Pyro Band NinjaI lovels this! This is AH-MAY-ZING! Can't wait for the next chapter! XD
4/11/2011 c15 3Ramar
:) I absolutely enjoyed reading the blooming relationship between Jace and Mera! And don't worry about the formatting because it's perfectly fine...for my computer anyway =D And Susy's POV gives a better understanding of her character and I hope you continue on with that coz I'm actually quite curious as to how it will end for her...will she end up with that Barracuda/Jason guy or someone else (and for some reason, I'm getting this feeling that she'll end up with Christian...or it's just me... :D)
3Ramar:) I absolutely enjoyed reading the blooming relationship between Jace and Mera! And don't worry about the formatting because it's perfectly fine...for my computer anyway =D And Susy's POV gives a better understanding of her character and I hope you continue on with that coz I'm actually quite curious as to how it will end for her...will she end up with that Barracuda/Jason guy or someone else (and for some reason, I'm getting this feeling that she'll end up with Christian...or it's just me... :D)
4/11/2011 c15 Kalaina D. A. Lynn
Yay an update! Lets cut to the chase, i love how close mera and jace are getting,its wonderful! Next, christian yelling out "kiss" was the funniest part in this chapter.Finaly i love, love, love susy's pov if this wasnt apart of this story i would say you should make one about her problem's. Well all in all i loved this chapter and i hope there are more like this one! P.S. LOVED IT!
Yay an update! Lets cut to the chase, i love how close mera and jace are getting,its wonderful! Next, christian yelling out "kiss" was the funniest part in this chapter.Finaly i love, love, love susy's pov if this wasnt apart of this story i would say you should make one about her problem's. Well all in all i loved this chapter and i hope there are more like this one! P.S. LOVED IT!
4/11/2011 c15 Matiroxs
OMG YOU ARE THE BEST FUCKING WRITER EVER! Not only are your creative ideas awesome, but your vocabulary and grammar skills are also top notch. I would give you a standing ovation but you can't see me, so It would be pointless... Anyways, you rock :D
OMG YOU ARE THE BEST FUCKING WRITER EVER! Not only are your creative ideas awesome, but your vocabulary and grammar skills are also top notch. I would give you a standing ovation but you can't see me, so It would be pointless... Anyways, you rock :D
4/10/2011 c15 Arabea
I would just like to inform you that I love your story. =) Totally read all 15 chapters instead of writing my paper. Mmhmm. I can't necessarily say I regret it. I love the characters - especially Christian. Were he real, I would attempt to entrap him in marriage. No lie. =)
I would just like to inform you that I love your story. =) Totally read all 15 chapters instead of writing my paper. Mmhmm. I can't necessarily say I regret it. I love the characters - especially Christian. Were he real, I would attempt to entrap him in marriage. No lie. =)
4/10/2011 c15 BaleighTheMadQueen
I love this whole chapter! Seriously awesomeness. From experience I've learned that chapter thirteen tends to be one of the better ones. It must be a sign. Anyway, I've been reading your story for a while and I really love it :) please update again soon.
I love this whole chapter! Seriously awesomeness. From experience I've learned that chapter thirteen tends to be one of the better ones. It must be a sign. Anyway, I've been reading your story for a while and I really love it :) please update again soon.
4/10/2011 c15 pbgurl
yeah, I was wondering what was going on with fictionpress. I've been getting updates but then when I click the link it says it may take 15 minutes to show up. Wierd.
I'm glad you didn't have Mera and Jace jump into a relationship immediatley. I mean I want them to be together badly but I wanted her to tell him about having his journal. Also, for him to be honest with her about his life.
I love that last part witht the hug too! :)
I'm coming to like Susy more and more and I like the wierd sort of friendship between her and Mera.
-Liz :D
yeah, I was wondering what was going on with fictionpress. I've been getting updates but then when I click the link it says it may take 15 minutes to show up. Wierd.
I'm glad you didn't have Mera and Jace jump into a relationship immediatley. I mean I want them to be together badly but I wanted her to tell him about having his journal. Also, for him to be honest with her about his life.
I love that last part witht the hug too! :)
I'm coming to like Susy more and more and I like the wierd sort of friendship between her and Mera.
-Liz :D
4/7/2011 c14 StevieIsMe
I love your story to bits and I can't wait 'til the next update. You have a really good talent and I wouldn't be surprised if you have Book-Worm-itis like me LOL! I guess that was a not-so-funny joke, huh? Well, I'll leave now and check back soon. I can't wait! :)
I love your story to bits and I can't wait 'til the next update. You have a really good talent and I wouldn't be surprised if you have Book-Worm-itis like me LOL! I guess that was a not-so-funny joke, huh? Well, I'll leave now and check back soon. I can't wait! :)
4/6/2011 c14 11Caoimhe Rose
oh my goodness! i love your story to bits!
the last part where jace tells mara that if he lost her that he wouldn't be able to forgive himself, reminded me so much of something that someone very close to me told me.
anyways, i thoroughly enjoyed your story so far, i can't wait to read the future chapters. i am glad i picked your story to read.
there were a few spelling mistakes, but i understand that if you are using a phone to write your chapters then it is hard to pick the mistakes out. if you want help finding a beta i think i may be able to help with that.
thanks for the great story!
11Caoimhe Roseoh my goodness! i love your story to bits!
the last part where jace tells mara that if he lost her that he wouldn't be able to forgive himself, reminded me so much of something that someone very close to me told me.
anyways, i thoroughly enjoyed your story so far, i can't wait to read the future chapters. i am glad i picked your story to read.
there were a few spelling mistakes, but i understand that if you are using a phone to write your chapters then it is hard to pick the mistakes out. if you want help finding a beta i think i may be able to help with that.
thanks for the great story!