for Dear Moron7/4/2012 c22 
1The Lost and The Found
OMG! I cant wait for the next chapter! I love Jace sooo much! I love this story! I was so sad becuase the update took so long, so i had to re-read most of the story but thats okay. It was totally worth it! Just for future reference... I noticed that, in ohter chapters, you used the word sale. Like when Jacob was talking to Susy, "you sale yourself short" I think that you meant, "you SELL yourself short" and sorry for the caps but i cant really bold or italic the word. Not trying to be a bitch ;) but yeah! love the story sooo much :D keep up the good work :D
Lonelygurl101
1The Lost and The FoundOMG! I cant wait for the next chapter! I love Jace sooo much! I love this story! I was so sad becuase the update took so long, so i had to re-read most of the story but thats okay. It was totally worth it! Just for future reference... I noticed that, in ohter chapters, you used the word sale. Like when Jacob was talking to Susy, "you sale yourself short" I think that you meant, "you SELL yourself short" and sorry for the caps but i cant really bold or italic the word. Not trying to be a bitch ;) but yeah! love the story sooo much :D keep up the good work :D
Lonelygurl101
7/4/2012 c22 16Nacht Graves
I love this story as well as YPMFWAS which i hope you havent discontinued. it's my first time reviewing, and i am super uber glad you updated! :D Jace is awesome and i love how he teases little naive Mera, and its hilarious to me for some reason to see him all possessive, poor Cayden. I personally dont really like Suzy and i feel pretty bad for Jacob. Kevin is completely wacked and psycho, but i still love him... i love crazies :P Keep writing awesomeness!
16Nacht GravesI love this story as well as YPMFWAS which i hope you havent discontinued. it's my first time reviewing, and i am super uber glad you updated! :D Jace is awesome and i love how he teases little naive Mera, and its hilarious to me for some reason to see him all possessive, poor Cayden. I personally dont really like Suzy and i feel pretty bad for Jacob. Kevin is completely wacked and psycho, but i still love him... i love crazies :P Keep writing awesomeness!
7/2/2012 c3 Guest
um.. u got waste and waist the wrong way round in this chapter
waste-rubish part of the human body below the ribs and above the hips
um.. u got waste and waist the wrong way round in this chapter
waste-rubish part of the human body below the ribs and above the hips
7/1/2012 c22 DA-chen1
Hey! Wow, a new chapter! I really enjoyed your writing!
But are they really at the stage "second base"? It's not a bit too early? ;-)
I like your style.. you are sometimes a bit cRaZy.. keep it! :-P
Mira
Hey! Wow, a new chapter! I really enjoyed your writing!
But are they really at the stage "second base"? It's not a bit too early? ;-)
I like your style.. you are sometimes a bit cRaZy.. keep it! :-P
Mira
6/29/2012 c22 1RomanticaKH1
Oh my, I was under the impression that this story was finished! I've been reading it for some time now and now I feel stupid. _ _ but I really glad though, because I fucking love this story! Please continue to write and you'll always have fans hun! Don't fret!
1RomanticaKH1Oh my, I was under the impression that this story was finished! I've been reading it for some time now and now I feel stupid. _ _ but I really glad though, because I fucking love this story! Please continue to write and you'll always have fans hun! Don't fret!
6/27/2012 c22 Bubbly Girl
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Peace, Love and Happiness! :)
Bubbly Girl
6/27/2012 c22 1Momo17
Is it weird that I like Jace's perverted mind? Ahaha, wow, Suzy, how could she get drunk whilst pregnant? That was stupid and just plain dumb. I felt bad on Jacob, I get why he was so angry, this is their child she could be harming, I didnt like that bit.
More Jane and Christian, their unconventional relationship is just plain brilliant!
1Momo17Is it weird that I like Jace's perverted mind? Ahaha, wow, Suzy, how could she get drunk whilst pregnant? That was stupid and just plain dumb. I felt bad on Jacob, I get why he was so angry, this is their child she could be harming, I didnt like that bit.
More Jane and Christian, their unconventional relationship is just plain brilliant!
6/26/2012 c22 7J.J. LaRoux
Amazing chapter! I hope I don't have to wait a long for the next update, this story is just too great!
7J.J. LaRouxAmazing chapter! I hope I don't have to wait a long for the next update, this story is just too great!
6/26/2012 c5 3dream-beautiful
I'm rereading cause its been so long since you updated xD But this is too cute :) I'm just confused about Mera's relationship with her family.
3dream-beautifulI'm rereading cause its been so long since you updated xD But this is too cute :) I'm just confused about Mera's relationship with her family.