
6/26/2012 c22
29Ginbrat
I love when Suzy acted like she was drunk and Jacob carried her out oh and I love how Jace is so over protective.

I love when Suzy acted like she was drunk and Jacob carried her out oh and I love how Jace is so over protective.
6/25/2012 c22
3TheClosetWriter16
:D GREAT chapter! Jace is so funny hahaha
Don't worry! You have not lost all your fans!
But for not updating for half a year, I'm pretty sure I lost all mine :(
KEEP WRITING!

:D GREAT chapter! Jace is so funny hahaha
Don't worry! You have not lost all your fans!
But for not updating for half a year, I'm pretty sure I lost all mine :(
KEEP WRITING!
5/22/2012 c9
8shouldntcomeback
I just started reading today, and I probably won't review every chapter while I am still playing 'catch-up', I just wanted to let you know that I love this story. It is extremely well written and I can only hope to become this good of a writer. Other than a few typos, I can find no flaws in the story. I LOVE it. I have seen Kevin Hart videos and so now I have an interesting mental image of him saying 'I will be watching you...' Like he wasn't already strange enough! :)

I just started reading today, and I probably won't review every chapter while I am still playing 'catch-up', I just wanted to let you know that I love this story. It is extremely well written and I can only hope to become this good of a writer. Other than a few typos, I can find no flaws in the story. I LOVE it. I have seen Kevin Hart videos and so now I have an interesting mental image of him saying 'I will be watching you...' Like he wasn't already strange enough! :)
5/11/2012 c20
3AnaidSkylight
hi tana! i really love your story and i think you really have a great imagination. keep up the good work! i know that you must also have work to do and stuff but please update! i m in love with your story and i m really looking forward to seeing what happens next to jace and mera.
take care!

hi tana! i really love your story and i think you really have a great imagination. keep up the good work! i know that you must also have work to do and stuff but please update! i m in love with your story and i m really looking forward to seeing what happens next to jace and mera.
take care!
3/26/2012 c21 DA-chen1
What is happening here?
Where are chapter 22, 23, 24 and so on?
Don't say, that you quit? I LOVE YOUR STORY.
Please, keep going on! :-)
Jace is wonderful..Mera is so cute and Chris is cool, perfect gang ;-)
I'll wait for your chapters! Mira
What is happening here?
Where are chapter 22, 23, 24 and so on?
Don't say, that you quit? I LOVE YOUR STORY.
Please, keep going on! :-)
Jace is wonderful..Mera is so cute and Chris is cool, perfect gang ;-)
I'll wait for your chapters! Mira
3/26/2012 c16 DA-chen1
Je déteste cliffhanger!
Mais je t'aime your story!
Now for real, I really like your story and your changes in the point of view is okay, as long as it has the effect in the end to clarify things for us readers!
Have a nice day, Mira
Je déteste cliffhanger!
Mais je t'aime your story!
Now for real, I really like your story and your changes in the point of view is okay, as long as it has the effect in the end to clarify things for us readers!
Have a nice day, Mira
3/24/2012 c13 DA-chen1
Hi Tana!
I really like your story!
I think, a more serious future for Jace is good!
I hope, he is getting out of it- alive?
Okay, we will see... ;-)
Mira
Hi Tana!
I really like your story!
I think, a more serious future for Jace is good!
I hope, he is getting out of it- alive?
Okay, we will see... ;-)
Mira
3/21/2012 c5 DA-chen1
Well, this was crazy! Mera with a gun?
I hope, he doesn't drag her in this shit!
Mira
Well, this was crazy! Mera with a gun?
I hope, he doesn't drag her in this shit!
Mira