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7/27/2010 c4 150SpawnMeister666
A decent enough introduction. A few minor typos and slight mistakes with things like 'lead' being used instead of 'led', but nothing glaringly ridiculous.

7/25/2010 c4 7AlysonSkye
NO There's no more . . . *sniff* Great cliffhanger, except now you've driven me completely and utterly insane in need for more, so do hurry up! Please! For my mental health! My only recommendation is to not make it so obvious that Lord Bastian is Anthony's father. (I'm right, right? It's a guess, but there's a lot to back up that claim. If I'm wrong, don't tell me!)

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