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7/30/2010 c1 78Insanity Streak
This is such a cute poem. I love the beginning especially. Really nice. Beautiful. :)
7/24/2010 c1 13svuobsessor
I loved it. The mention of your hair made it slightly humorous and then it got really serious at the end. It was very emotion filled. Good job.
7/24/2010 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
I really really liked it. It's pretty much exactly what I've felt for a long time. Except it's only a year and a half...

I think you maybe tried a little bit to actually make it rhyme, when it didn't have to, but all the same, very nice piece :)
7/24/2010 c1 48Aiden Payne
Aw. This is really touching, very bittersweet. It had a great flow, but the one part "What happened along the way / That made you say the things you said on that day?" seemed a bit off-flow compared to the rest before it. "What happened along the way / that brought the things you said that day" brought or caused just seemed a bit more fitting as far as words involved, but it's a REALLY small nit-pick that's probably just a personal thing. It does not take away how great this is, I enjoyed it. :)

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