for Two Years Ago7/30/2010 c1 
78Insanity Streak
This is such a cute poem. I love the beginning especially. Really nice. Beautiful. :)
78Insanity StreakThis is such a cute poem. I love the beginning especially. Really nice. Beautiful. :)
7/24/2010 c1 13svuobsessor
I loved it. The mention of your hair made it slightly humorous and then it got really serious at the end. It was very emotion filled. Good job.
13svuobsessorI loved it. The mention of your hair made it slightly humorous and then it got really serious at the end. It was very emotion filled. Good job.
7/24/2010 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
I really really liked it. It's pretty much exactly what I've felt for a long time. Except it's only a year and a half...
I think you maybe tried a little bit to actually make it rhyme, when it didn't have to, but all the same, very nice piece :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsI really really liked it. It's pretty much exactly what I've felt for a long time. Except it's only a year and a half...
I think you maybe tried a little bit to actually make it rhyme, when it didn't have to, but all the same, very nice piece :)
7/24/2010 c1 48Aiden Payne
Aw. This is really touching, very bittersweet. It had a great flow, but the one part "What happened along the way / That made you say the things you said on that day?" seemed a bit off-flow compared to the rest before it. "What happened along the way / that brought the things you said that day" brought or caused just seemed a bit more fitting as far as words involved, but it's a REALLY small nit-pick that's probably just a personal thing. It does not take away how great this is, I enjoyed it. :)
48Aiden PayneAw. This is really touching, very bittersweet. It had a great flow, but the one part "What happened along the way / That made you say the things you said on that day?" seemed a bit off-flow compared to the rest before it. "What happened along the way / that brought the things you said that day" brought or caused just seemed a bit more fitting as far as words involved, but it's a REALLY small nit-pick that's probably just a personal thing. It does not take away how great this is, I enjoyed it. :)