for The Daughters3/28/2011 c1 
21Lady Lucia
Wow.
This is really awesome! I'm picky about poems, and it's hard for me to totally enjoy reading/like a poem...but yours really did the job!
I love your simile
"Syllables slipped from our lips like
Falling autumn leaves."
And your metaphors are unique and imaginative. Good job!
Now if only you would fix the "will.s" problem and it would be totally perfect! :P
21Lady LuciaWow.
This is really awesome! I'm picky about poems, and it's hard for me to totally enjoy reading/like a poem...but yours really did the job!
I love your simile
"Syllables slipped from our lips like
Falling autumn leaves."
And your metaphors are unique and imaginative. Good job!
Now if only you would fix the "will.s" problem and it would be totally perfect! :P
9/14/2010 c1 78Insanity Streak
I can really feel the bitterness in this. My favourite bits are: "spouting red wine knowlegde," "Our lives lost in airplane tickets," "syllables slipped from our lips like falling autumn leaves." I really like the Rupunzel reference, also. This poem is very clever and you have some very well worded sentiments. Also, with the last word, "will.s," is that a puncuation error or is it supposed to be written like that? Anyway, great job.
78Insanity StreakI can really feel the bitterness in this. My favourite bits are: "spouting red wine knowlegde," "Our lives lost in airplane tickets," "syllables slipped from our lips like falling autumn leaves." I really like the Rupunzel reference, also. This poem is very clever and you have some very well worded sentiments. Also, with the last word, "will.s," is that a puncuation error or is it supposed to be written like that? Anyway, great job.
7/25/2010 c1 16Long Island Iced Tea
OK, I totally get this one - poor little rich girls and everything. It's nice, but personally I don't think it's your best. Your best would be... um, I'll have to go through all of your stuff (you're so deliciously prolific!) and tell you.
16Long Island Iced TeaOK, I totally get this one - poor little rich girls and everything. It's nice, but personally I don't think it's your best. Your best would be... um, I'll have to go through all of your stuff (you're so deliciously prolific!) and tell you.