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for The Moon

7/28/2010 c1 3Meghan-Two Loves-One Heart
I liked this poem, but I wish it were a little longer. I understand if you don't want to add any more stanzas but I would enjoy it if you did.
7/26/2010 c1 22the-broken-clock
i loved it, the moon is all alone, left in the sea of the sky
7/25/2010 c1 salt pillar
I like how the poem is so short, and you've isolated the lines into two groups, to make your point about loneliness visual.

There's not really much for me to interpret, though, due to its length. I think it's pretty straightforward.

I like the tone as well; you make the narrator seem almost childlike. Innocence, naivete, and what not.

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