for The Moon7/28/2010 c1 
3Meghan-Two Loves-One Heart
I liked this poem, but I wish it were a little longer. I understand if you don't want to add any more stanzas but I would enjoy it if you did.
3Meghan-Two Loves-One HeartI liked this poem, but I wish it were a little longer. I understand if you don't want to add any more stanzas but I would enjoy it if you did.
7/25/2010 c1 salt pillar
I like how the poem is so short, and you've isolated the lines into two groups, to make your point about loneliness visual.
There's not really much for me to interpret, though, due to its length. I think it's pretty straightforward.
I like the tone as well; you make the narrator seem almost childlike. Innocence, naivete, and what not.
I like how the poem is so short, and you've isolated the lines into two groups, to make your point about loneliness visual.
There's not really much for me to interpret, though, due to its length. I think it's pretty straightforward.
I like the tone as well; you make the narrator seem almost childlike. Innocence, naivete, and what not.