for The Pirate's Legacy: New Beginnings3/26/2021 c3 Taraxoxo
I think I'm reading this for the tenth time. I always some back to it every once in a while. Your writing is so good and a pleasure to read. I'm sorry to hear you couldn't get a good deal to publish your books but if you ever do I'd happily buy them!
I think I'm reading this for the tenth time. I always some back to it every once in a while. Your writing is so good and a pleasure to read. I'm sorry to hear you couldn't get a good deal to publish your books but if you ever do I'd happily buy them!
3/2/2021 c21 Zavarian
First, let me say that I love this story, and have for years. lm rereading it for the first time in quite a few years and I have a few notes if you don't mind. I don't remember the time jumps being so jarring in my last read. Maybe when you reposted, some peices were left out? For example, the part where Roger passes out in the water on the island, and we come back to the entire crew liberated and wreaking havoc. Or straight from Roger being pissed at Em on the island, to acknowledging his feelings and opening up enough to tell her about his childhood in the beginning of the next chapter. Or from Em's conversation with Michael straight to the kiss with Roger. I realize not every part of the story has to be explicitly told but I feel like things like retrieving the Mermaids Tear and the intricacies of the conversation leading up to the kiss are these big moments that the story has been building up to and we kind of skip over them. Feels a bit jarring and unfulfilling after all the build up. Not to mention it's a bit hard to keep track of without giving us any context to ground us in time and space in relation to where we were last. Just a few suggestions. All that being said,
I also want to thank you so much for writing this story. It's beautiful, and has been my very favorite for many years
First, let me say that I love this story, and have for years. lm rereading it for the first time in quite a few years and I have a few notes if you don't mind. I don't remember the time jumps being so jarring in my last read. Maybe when you reposted, some peices were left out? For example, the part where Roger passes out in the water on the island, and we come back to the entire crew liberated and wreaking havoc. Or straight from Roger being pissed at Em on the island, to acknowledging his feelings and opening up enough to tell her about his childhood in the beginning of the next chapter. Or from Em's conversation with Michael straight to the kiss with Roger. I realize not every part of the story has to be explicitly told but I feel like things like retrieving the Mermaids Tear and the intricacies of the conversation leading up to the kiss are these big moments that the story has been building up to and we kind of skip over them. Feels a bit jarring and unfulfilling after all the build up. Not to mention it's a bit hard to keep track of without giving us any context to ground us in time and space in relation to where we were last. Just a few suggestions. All that being said,
I also want to thank you so much for writing this story. It's beautiful, and has been my very favorite for many years
9/30/2017 c34 REGRETABLE
This was such an amazing story! I loved how the relationship took it's time progressing and growing. The locations, characters and challenges they faced were so well written - I really appreciated the individuality and thought that went into all of it. I hope you do decide to try to publish this again someday. It's an excellent read.
This was such an amazing story! I loved how the relationship took it's time progressing and growing. The locations, characters and challenges they faced were so well written - I really appreciated the individuality and thought that went into all of it. I hope you do decide to try to publish this again someday. It's an excellent read.
1/4/2016 c34 Guest
This was a great story! You definitely should have gotten more reviews this was awesome!
This was a great story! You definitely should have gotten more reviews this was awesome!
8/14/2015 c1 Guest
Love this story :) great characters too
Love this story :) great characters too
8/14/2015 c34 Guest
I loved this story soooo much. Definitely the best story I've read on this website. :)
I loved this story soooo much. Definitely the best story I've read on this website. :)
3/9/2015 c34 NolyKariad
It was a Wonderfull adventure ! Thank you so much for sharing.
It was a Wonderfull adventure ! Thank you so much for sharing.
12/15/2014 c34 Anon
I love this story! AND it's complete
I'm halfway in the sequel, but I came back to add 1 to the number of reviews haha!
I love this story! AND it's complete
I'm halfway in the sequel, but I came back to add 1 to the number of reviews haha!
1/24/2014 c1 A Helpful Person
You could self-publish this...
You could self-publish this...
12/8/2013 c34 
9Francheska Anazette
So I fell in love with this story. I loved the plot and the characters. Everything about it was amazing to read.
9Francheska AnazetteSo I fell in love with this story. I loved the plot and the characters. Everything about it was amazing to read.
11/30/2013 c34 Mak
hehe... he called Em a child.
haha... "I hope your oddess has more patience with you than she does..." - hahahhahaahhaha
It's a reoccuring theme that Em has to convince Roger that she does want to be with him.
SAPPPY! :)
And now I feel fully prepared to take on the next book.
hehe... he called Em a child.
haha... "I hope your oddess has more patience with you than she does..." - hahahhahaahhaha
It's a reoccuring theme that Em has to convince Roger that she does want to be with him.
SAPPPY! :)
And now I feel fully prepared to take on the next book.
11/30/2013 c33 Mak
I'd comment on this, but I've read it recently and have no new impressions to really add. :)
I'd comment on this, but I've read it recently and have no new impressions to really add. :)
11/30/2013 c32 Mak
Well I guess we're all about to find out about her princess status. :)
pirates are so sneaky.
Aw... a sappy moment at the end. You know I'm a sucker for those.
Well I guess we're all about to find out about her princess status. :)
pirates are so sneaky.
Aw... a sappy moment at the end. You know I'm a sucker for those.