for To Kiss a Ghost6/19/2011 c1 Kumafighter
Couldn't sleep so I decided to finish this last one shot. As I said before, you have a talent for writing in different genre. While the ending was bittersweet, it still put a smile on my face. And note to self, never review with no sleep again.
Couldn't sleep so I decided to finish this last one shot. As I said before, you have a talent for writing in different genre. While the ending was bittersweet, it still put a smile on my face. And note to self, never review with no sleep again.
11/18/2010 c1 xCynicx9
I love the concept of this story; However, I felt as though it was horrible rushed even for a one shot. I would like this to be more than a one shot and to have more details in it. The fact that she appeared out of no where with no detail, well, it's just not like you. Also, the part with the burglar could have been a little more exciting.
I love the concept of this story; However, I felt as though it was horrible rushed even for a one shot. I would like this to be more than a one shot and to have more details in it. The fact that she appeared out of no where with no detail, well, it's just not like you. Also, the part with the burglar could have been a little more exciting.