for Land of the Saints4/19/2011 c5 anotherusername
all your stories i love. i haven't been on fictionpress for awhile but i'm always excited to read yours.
- ana :)
all your stories i love. i haven't been on fictionpress for awhile but i'm always excited to read yours.
- ana :)
4/6/2011 c1 
3HPRK08
I could've sworn I put you on Author alert! Oh well, I came here soon enough didn't I? I can't wait to read more of this! DALTON'S EX? Can't believe Dalt's back, I remember reading the last name. I also like the title loads :D Can't wait to read more of this!
~Swati
3HPRK08I could've sworn I put you on Author alert! Oh well, I came here soon enough didn't I? I can't wait to read more of this! DALTON'S EX? Can't believe Dalt's back, I remember reading the last name. I also like the title loads :D Can't wait to read more of this!
~Swati
3/1/2011 c5 dreamfearlessly
I am so incredibly happy that you updated your story! I absolutely cannot wait until the two characters interact more!
&& I also wanted to include that I've read two stories from the Mastersons series and I'm in love with your writing! The interactions between Fallon and River were enlightening to read! I'm currently reading this story along with the oneshot series, and let me tell you, I get so excited when you update!
I am so incredibly happy that you updated your story! I absolutely cannot wait until the two characters interact more!
&& I also wanted to include that I've read two stories from the Mastersons series and I'm in love with your writing! The interactions between Fallon and River were enlightening to read! I'm currently reading this story along with the oneshot series, and let me tell you, I get so excited when you update!
12/13/2010 c5 Hydrogen Peroxide
Will you be posting Keely's story after you're done with nanowrimo? I can't wait till she meets their parents. Its going to be fun!
Will you be posting Keely's story after you're done with nanowrimo? I can't wait till she meets their parents. Its going to be fun!
12/9/2010 c5 readwrite3
All your stories deserve props. I've read most of them, fell in love with all of them that i have love, including this one. I love the characters personalities and so in conclusion, I just wanted to say, you should update quickly.
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All your stories deserve props. I've read most of them, fell in love with all of them that i have love, including this one. I love the characters personalities and so in conclusion, I just wanted to say, you should update quickly.
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11/14/2010 c5 AllTheWayUp12
This is such a fun story to read. I like Peyton's attitude and I had no trouble imagining Kyler.
I'm looking forward to more. :)
This is such a fun story to read. I like Peyton's attitude and I had no trouble imagining Kyler.
I'm looking forward to more. :)
11/10/2010 c5 SweetBagel
I'm liking this story so far!
so this is set way before charity ever met dalton's family right? will keely ever find someone else?(she's so cheerful, its hard to believe she had an abortion)
I'm liking this story so far!
so this is set way before charity ever met dalton's family right? will keely ever find someone else?(she's so cheerful, its hard to believe she had an abortion)
11/1/2010 c4 Devilish Kisses
Gotta love the older brothers :D and, yay, they don't...completely hate each other anymore!
Gotta love the older brothers :D and, yay, they don't...completely hate each other anymore!
11/1/2010 c1 Devilish Kisses
I love it :) I totally forgot that Keely was Dalton's girlfriend until you mentioned it in the author's note! This will be interesting, I can tell :)
I love it :) I totally forgot that Keely was Dalton's girlfriend until you mentioned it in the author's note! This will be interesting, I can tell :)
11/1/2010 c5 rainbabie
LOL, this chapter reminded me of the scene from "Have You Met the Morgans" when SJP and Hugh Grant go to a mega store similar to BJs/Costco/Sam's Club for the first time! Can't wait for the next chapter!
LOL, this chapter reminded me of the scene from "Have You Met the Morgans" when SJP and Hugh Grant go to a mega store similar to BJs/Costco/Sam's Club for the first time! Can't wait for the next chapter!
10/31/2010 c5 iiHEARTyuu
Haha, Keely is a trouble maker. I'm starting to like her more (I didn't really like her cause of Dalton & Charity's oneshot. But that's because I love that couple and she was kinda ruining things :|) and I can't wait for her story!
Not much else to say since it was a filler. (Loving the story, didn't notice and grammar errors etc.) So until next time :)
Haha, Keely is a trouble maker. I'm starting to like her more (I didn't really like her cause of Dalton & Charity's oneshot. But that's because I love that couple and she was kinda ruining things :|) and I can't wait for her story!
Not much else to say since it was a filler. (Loving the story, didn't notice and grammar errors etc.) So until next time :)
10/30/2010 c5 4sunnybunny17
Ahh it took forever for fictionpress to finally let ne review this chapter! But I got it:D
wonderful chapter. Who in the world has never heard of Wal-Mart? We practically live off of it! Lol(:
can't wait for the next chapter!
-brooke
4sunnybunny17Ahh it took forever for fictionpress to finally let ne review this chapter! But I got it:D
wonderful chapter. Who in the world has never heard of Wal-Mart? We practically live off of it! Lol(:
can't wait for the next chapter!
-brooke
10/30/2010 c5 Rilan Morr
Filler or not, it was still good. I can't wait for the party, haha~ :) Thanks for the update!
Filler or not, it was still good. I can't wait for the party, haha~ :) Thanks for the update!