for Land of the Saints10/29/2010 c5 kfjhbvasiuhvauvba
Even though it was a filler, it was still interesting.
And KIA IS ADORABLE. I love that she calls Keely, 'Kiwi'.
Even though it was a filler, it was still interesting.
And KIA IS ADORABLE. I love that she calls Keely, 'Kiwi'.
10/29/2010 c5 
11Jessiquie
oh, I was begining to think you'd forgotten about this story... I'm kind of glad its still going though. Still loving the chemistry between Kyler and Peyton and now an added mystery of what happened to Kia's mum (not sure I want to know that one though, it seems a bit more sad centred).
haha, oh NaNo. Have fun with it. I'm giving it a serious attempy this year. I say that, but I still haven't decided what Story I'm writing yet, and am working all week, but I've got a few ideas to choose from, and at least this time theres no uni to get in the way. Not long now till it all starts though. Have you chosen what your writing for it? and planned it out and everything already?
11Jessiquieoh, I was begining to think you'd forgotten about this story... I'm kind of glad its still going though. Still loving the chemistry between Kyler and Peyton and now an added mystery of what happened to Kia's mum (not sure I want to know that one though, it seems a bit more sad centred).
haha, oh NaNo. Have fun with it. I'm giving it a serious attempy this year. I say that, but I still haven't decided what Story I'm writing yet, and am working all week, but I've got a few ideas to choose from, and at least this time theres no uni to get in the way. Not long now till it all starts though. Have you chosen what your writing for it? and planned it out and everything already?
10/29/2010 c5 Warrior-Princess06
'Wow.! Thanks for this great chapter..
I love it especially when they meet at Wal-Mart..
and how Peyton fascinated by that place..haha..
anyways, i wonder what will happen on the Fourth of July..
can't wait for the party and meet the St. James parents..hehe..
well, keep up the good work..until next time.! :))
'Wow.! Thanks for this great chapter..
I love it especially when they meet at Wal-Mart..
and how Peyton fascinated by that place..haha..
anyways, i wonder what will happen on the Fourth of July..
can't wait for the party and meet the St. James parents..hehe..
well, keep up the good work..until next time.! :))
10/28/2010 c5 1Jinxed Rogue
Native New Yorker here, and if you need any references, feel free to ask. Wal-Marts are actually banned from city limits because they would ruin a lot of local businesses.
1Jinxed RogueNative New Yorker here, and if you need any references, feel free to ask. Wal-Marts are actually banned from city limits because they would ruin a lot of local businesses.
10/28/2010 c5 1funnechick
Haha...I loved her fascination with Wal-Mart. I knew she would be amazed.
Can't wait to find out how the Fourth of July party goes!
1funnechickHaha...I loved her fascination with Wal-Mart. I knew she would be amazed.
Can't wait to find out how the Fourth of July party goes!
10/28/2010 c5 2asianinvasion0530
Wow I never knew people could be so fascinated by a Walmart. That's just so weird that she never even stepped foot in one before!
Anyways, if I were Peyton, I'd be really bored if I only staying in a hotel for a whole month. I don't know how she did it.
2asianinvasion0530Wow I never knew people could be so fascinated by a Walmart. That's just so weird that she never even stepped foot in one before!
Anyways, if I were Peyton, I'd be really bored if I only staying in a hotel for a whole month. I don't know how she did it.
10/28/2010 c5 8castiel89
COWBOY FIX!
This was the first thing I read this morning when I woke up. You know I'm addicted to the SJ men.
Filler, yes. But we got to see more of what his family was like (HELLO ADORABLE KIA!) Kyler with his niece is just a little glimpse as to what he would be like as a father. She could totally be a girl version of a little Forrest and help Keely hook Ky up with Peyton ;)
Love it. As usual. I think there were some typos, can't remember where now, but eh. It was late for you. You'll miss them.
And the Walmart part. HAHAHA. Oh what a culture shock, but it was a nice touch :D.
8castiel89COWBOY FIX!
This was the first thing I read this morning when I woke up. You know I'm addicted to the SJ men.
Filler, yes. But we got to see more of what his family was like (HELLO ADORABLE KIA!) Kyler with his niece is just a little glimpse as to what he would be like as a father. She could totally be a girl version of a little Forrest and help Keely hook Ky up with Peyton ;)
Love it. As usual. I think there were some typos, can't remember where now, but eh. It was late for you. You'll miss them.
And the Walmart part. HAHAHA. Oh what a culture shock, but it was a nice touch :D.
10/28/2010 c5 5AmandaHold
after peyton decided to go shopping, i knew she was going to see Kyler. i feel kind of stupid that i didn't figure it out sooner though considering right before that you had in aobut Keely and Kyler doing their mother's shopping. i liked that Peyton didn't know what a wal-mart was and was amazed by it. it's hard to believe that people actually don't know what it is but i guess it's true. the next chapter sounds interesting. i can't wait =)
5AmandaHoldafter peyton decided to go shopping, i knew she was going to see Kyler. i feel kind of stupid that i didn't figure it out sooner though considering right before that you had in aobut Keely and Kyler doing their mother's shopping. i liked that Peyton didn't know what a wal-mart was and was amazed by it. it's hard to believe that people actually don't know what it is but i guess it's true. the next chapter sounds interesting. i can't wait =)
10/28/2010 c5 1moonlitmidnight
OMG! I loved that chapter. And, I'm not sure if I've told you this yet, but I love this story :) And, I can't wait until Peyton and Kyler actually start to hit it off. I want them to get married and have like 20 kids... cuz that's how cute they are. I'm so glad you began this story too! I almost cried when you finished with the Mastersons... cuz I love them... but this story def makes me happe :D
So, moving on to the content... I just about died with amusement when Peyton questioned what Wal-Mart was... HAHA! Anyways... I'm going to go now... but I love this chapter :D
Update soon!
1moonlitmidnightOMG! I loved that chapter. And, I'm not sure if I've told you this yet, but I love this story :) And, I can't wait until Peyton and Kyler actually start to hit it off. I want them to get married and have like 20 kids... cuz that's how cute they are. I'm so glad you began this story too! I almost cried when you finished with the Mastersons... cuz I love them... but this story def makes me happe :D
So, moving on to the content... I just about died with amusement when Peyton questioned what Wal-Mart was... HAHA! Anyways... I'm going to go now... but I love this chapter :D
Update soon!
10/28/2010 c5 helena33139
as u said... just a filler... but i liked it. I'm truly enjoying this story :)
as u said... just a filler... but i liked it. I'm truly enjoying this story :)
10/28/2010 c5 2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
awesome chapter... i cant wait for the party, i have a feeling its gunna be a fun chapter to read. update soon XD
2I Will Not Die I Will Surviveawesome chapter... i cant wait for the party, i have a feeling its gunna be a fun chapter to read. update soon XD
10/28/2010 c5 Erin DJ
i like the pace of this story. it's not too fast. just wishing for a lot of things to happen in the next chapter. :))
i like the pace of this story. it's not too fast. just wishing for a lot of things to happen in the next chapter. :))