for Land of the Saints9/15/2010 c4 Julia
You should write for Harlequin, it's definitely up your alley.
You should write for Harlequin, it's definitely up your alley.
9/14/2010 c4 
4sunnybunny17
This is like so cute, and the way you ended this chapter was adorable!(; I know I'm gong to loge their relationship. I also like the brothers, they make the story funner:D you're an amazing writer, so keep it up, and update soon!
Love,
brooke
4sunnybunny17This is like so cute, and the way you ended this chapter was adorable!(; I know I'm gong to loge their relationship. I also like the brothers, they make the story funner:D you're an amazing writer, so keep it up, and update soon!
Love,
brooke
9/13/2010 c2 sunnybunny17
Haha I KNEW that was his bar(;
I'm kind od statring to get the name of the story. Can't wait to meet the other bros!
Gonna keep reading,
Brooke
Haha I KNEW that was his bar(;
I'm kind od statring to get the name of the story. Can't wait to meet the other bros!
Gonna keep reading,
Brooke
9/13/2010 c4 1Jinxed Rogue
Congrats! The Mastersons Series was/is awesome and totally deserved to win!
1Jinxed RogueCongrats! The Mastersons Series was/is awesome and totally deserved to win!
9/13/2010 c4 kfjhbvasiuhvauvba
I like that they're starting over, but I won't lie, I love reading their banter. And Kyler and Peyton are cute together :)
I like that they're starting over, but I won't lie, I love reading their banter. And Kyler and Peyton are cute together :)
9/13/2010 c4 2renegade01
congrats on winning. LOTS is beginning to grow on me. i love kyler's accent. ;)
2renegade01congrats on winning. LOTS is beginning to grow on me. i love kyler's accent. ;)
9/13/2010 c4 5AmandaHold
so they have a truce now. it's definitely evident that they'll have more disagreements. just saying that doesn't mean their personalities aren't going to clash. that's what makes it interesting though. it would get boring fast if they got along all the time. their arguments are amusing.
5AmandaHoldso they have a truce now. it's definitely evident that they'll have more disagreements. just saying that doesn't mean their personalities aren't going to clash. that's what makes it interesting though. it would get boring fast if they got along all the time. their arguments are amusing.
9/13/2010 c4 5Somedaymydreamswillcome
I love the storyline on this story, but sometimes I feel like Texas is misrepresented in the approach of where they are located. San Antonio is actually a bustling city and you really don't get the deep Southern house/ranch/small community until about an hour outside of San Antonio and it wouldn't be called San Antonio anymore, it would be something like Pleasanton...but farther out than that, like in between San Antonio and Corpus Christi. Also, it would probably be more realistic if the brother went to UT instead of Texas A&M, since he seems to be down for weekends...and Texas A&M would be like five hours from where I assume this ranch would be located, while UT would only be about two. ((Sorry UT student here. :P And my bf goes to UTSA and even he can't make the two hour trip up every single weekend.)) Maybe I'm just a little defensive of Texas is all. I feel like everyone gets us wrong in thinking we're all hick and ride horses everywhere. ahahahahahha :)) I mean I lived in Corpus, which is two hours south of San An, and now I moved up to Austin and truthfully the only time I've ever seen a community like what you're talking about is in the empty spaces of Texas in between large cities. Just thought I'd support the Texan side of this story! :) Love that you incorporated it, but it would help if you did a little research on the area and got a little more specific. It would lend a bunch of credibility and even spark some interest in the details of the story. :)
5SomedaymydreamswillcomeI love the storyline on this story, but sometimes I feel like Texas is misrepresented in the approach of where they are located. San Antonio is actually a bustling city and you really don't get the deep Southern house/ranch/small community until about an hour outside of San Antonio and it wouldn't be called San Antonio anymore, it would be something like Pleasanton...but farther out than that, like in between San Antonio and Corpus Christi. Also, it would probably be more realistic if the brother went to UT instead of Texas A&M, since he seems to be down for weekends...and Texas A&M would be like five hours from where I assume this ranch would be located, while UT would only be about two. ((Sorry UT student here. :P And my bf goes to UTSA and even he can't make the two hour trip up every single weekend.)) Maybe I'm just a little defensive of Texas is all. I feel like everyone gets us wrong in thinking we're all hick and ride horses everywhere. ahahahahahha :)) I mean I lived in Corpus, which is two hours south of San An, and now I moved up to Austin and truthfully the only time I've ever seen a community like what you're talking about is in the empty spaces of Texas in between large cities. Just thought I'd support the Texan side of this story! :) Love that you incorporated it, but it would help if you did a little research on the area and got a little more specific. It would lend a bunch of credibility and even spark some interest in the details of the story. :)
9/13/2010 c3 Worth A Thousand Words
So excited :)
I've read and lov al of your stories. The Masterson's have my heart.haha jk
Now, a new series new people, very excited. On chapter three and I'm alredy really liking the story. Can't wait for more.
BTW, how cn I find you on LG?
So excited :)
I've read and lov al of your stories. The Masterson's have my heart.haha jk
Now, a new series new people, very excited. On chapter three and I'm alredy really liking the story. Can't wait for more.
BTW, how cn I find you on LG?
9/13/2010 c4 iiHEARTyuu
They're both very ... fiery characters. Will make for an interesting read. Can't wait to see what kind of trouble they'll get up to lol.
Oh, and congrats on winning! I'm not surprised though, The Mastersons are pretty awesome :)
They're both very ... fiery characters. Will make for an interesting read. Can't wait to see what kind of trouble they'll get up to lol.
Oh, and congrats on winning! I'm not surprised though, The Mastersons are pretty awesome :)
9/12/2010 c1 4sunnybunny17
Hey, this story seems really good. I can see some majic in between them(; I like your idea of bow they meet, it's cute. I'm gonna keep reading...
-Brooke
4sunnybunny17Hey, this story seems really good. I can see some majic in between them(; I like your idea of bow they meet, it's cute. I'm gonna keep reading...
-Brooke
9/12/2010 c4 Bardess
It seems kind of...strange (or even kind of rude?) that you automatically assume cowboys say "ain't" and don't finish the "ing" words. It seems like a stereotype-buff cowboys with Southern accents. They shouldn't have to be portrayed like that. Other than that, I really like this story!
It seems kind of...strange (or even kind of rude?) that you automatically assume cowboys say "ain't" and don't finish the "ing" words. It seems like a stereotype-buff cowboys with Southern accents. They shouldn't have to be portrayed like that. Other than that, I really like this story!
9/12/2010 c1 1PurpleDewdrops
You're officially my favourite author now. Great work, here.
Me likey. :D
1PurpleDewdropsYou're officially my favourite author now. Great work, here.
Me likey. :D