for Fish Know About Love2/22/2014 c1 DragonOwl
I'm reading it! I hope the traffic thing works now as well! I really enjoyed this, especially the main character Loraine as she was really easy to relate too :)
I'm reading it! I hope the traffic thing works now as well! I really enjoyed this, especially the main character Loraine as she was really easy to relate too :)
12/12/2012 c1 Sparkly Sparkler the Sparkling
I love it! XD Especially the Oreo comments. And the fluff was awesome, too!
I love it! XD Especially the Oreo comments. And the fluff was awesome, too!
11/30/2012 c1 Float a Boat
I loved this story. It was so cute and I really enjoyed the humor in the story. There were definitely some laugh out loud moments for me. You could not help but like Lorraine and how clueless she can be. I am glad for a happy ending.
I loved this story. It was so cute and I really enjoyed the humor in the story. There were definitely some laugh out loud moments for me. You could not help but like Lorraine and how clueless she can be. I am glad for a happy ending.
9/6/2012 c1 spit at sanity
awesome!
awesome!
5/18/2012 c1 Fresh Harvest
I was pleasantly surprised by how much I liked this! Based on the title and summary I didn't really know what to expect, but it was adorable, funny, and heartwarming. Lorraine wins you over immediately with her naivete, and Clay is plain sweet. You managed to develop some solid characters in not that much space, and I love that! Also loved the detail about Bryan and Ryan and finally meeting the other brother-just a fun twist to add in.
:) Thanks for a very pleasant read!
I was pleasantly surprised by how much I liked this! Based on the title and summary I didn't really know what to expect, but it was adorable, funny, and heartwarming. Lorraine wins you over immediately with her naivete, and Clay is plain sweet. You managed to develop some solid characters in not that much space, and I love that! Also loved the detail about Bryan and Ryan and finally meeting the other brother-just a fun twist to add in.
:) Thanks for a very pleasant read!
3/23/2012 c1 The Random Passerby
Lorraine is so frickin hilarious. I love her style.
And i like your writing style. It is paced just the way it sounds right, i don't think it is too rushed or anything, since the point of this story is dating. It would be too weird if they were declaring their undying love to each other.
And yeah, i would like to check your other stories, i hope they would be as awesome as this is ;D
Dee
Lorraine is so frickin hilarious. I love her style.
And i like your writing style. It is paced just the way it sounds right, i don't think it is too rushed or anything, since the point of this story is dating. It would be too weird if they were declaring their undying love to each other.
And yeah, i would like to check your other stories, i hope they would be as awesome as this is ;D
Dee
11/14/2011 c1 sanzo-reload
omg! Lorraine is just too adorkable! Haha.. Everything about this fic made me laugh so hard!
Thanks for writing such awesome one-shot!
omg! Lorraine is just too adorkable! Haha.. Everything about this fic made me laugh so hard!
Thanks for writing such awesome one-shot!
10/16/2011 c1 marigam
I read it! It's sweet. Made me smile and all that good stuff.
Some Errors:
* At the Starbucks she ordered a hot chocolate but picked up a coffee.
* At the scene on the stairs Bryan turned into "Ryan".
* In the last scene Lor folded one arm against her chest. Folding two arms would be a less awkward position. Probably.
Those are just the few that jumped out at me. They didn't detract too much from the story.
I read it! It's sweet. Made me smile and all that good stuff.
Some Errors:
* At the Starbucks she ordered a hot chocolate but picked up a coffee.
* At the scene on the stairs Bryan turned into "Ryan".
* In the last scene Lor folded one arm against her chest. Folding two arms would be a less awkward position. Probably.
Those are just the few that jumped out at me. They didn't detract too much from the story.
10/13/2011 c1 taintedLullaby
This was great. Cute, funny and lighthearted, the perfect story to make you feel like your floating on a cloud. (lol sounds corny but that's exactly what I felt while reading this). I think my favourite part though had to be "Rawr. I am Cerberus." It was dorky and funny and caught me off guard and had me laughing out loud.
This was great. Cute, funny and lighthearted, the perfect story to make you feel like your floating on a cloud. (lol sounds corny but that's exactly what I felt while reading this). I think my favourite part though had to be "Rawr. I am Cerberus." It was dorky and funny and caught me off guard and had me laughing out loud.
7/25/2011 c1 
5Single White Rose
This was really cute. I really liked the characters, they came alive for me. :)
5Single White RoseThis was really cute. I really liked the characters, they came alive for me. :)
5/21/2011 c1 23Hypa To Hell And Back
I'm reading it! And... Hang on I read it... And I loved it! Haha! Dum me. Anywho I loved it and I think it was really cute. I love Clay and Lor reminds me of me and how stupid I can be sometimes. My head hurts actually never sit in the sun typing on an iPod it hurts but that has nothing to do with this. To be honest this was cleverly written. I think I saw a couple of mistakes but tis all good totherwise
23Hypa To Hell And BackI'm reading it! And... Hang on I read it... And I loved it! Haha! Dum me. Anywho I loved it and I think it was really cute. I love Clay and Lor reminds me of me and how stupid I can be sometimes. My head hurts actually never sit in the sun typing on an iPod it hurts but that has nothing to do with this. To be honest this was cleverly written. I think I saw a couple of mistakes but tis all good totherwise
11/12/2010 c1 chocolate and bananas
Kya. Okay, I have no idea if it's just the fact that I haven't read a romance oneshot in an obscenely long amount of time or the fact that this is just too cute, AND the fact that I feel like such a romantic right now but gah, seriously.
I am totally fawning over Clay right now.
There were a few grammar errors and some awkward phrases, but otherwise, I'm quite pleased with this work in general.
I also like how you didn't try to squeeze in the title into the work unnecessarily, and how it speaks for itself (because trust me, I've seen too many authors try to push their titles into the work).
xx
chocolate and bananas.
Kya. Okay, I have no idea if it's just the fact that I haven't read a romance oneshot in an obscenely long amount of time or the fact that this is just too cute, AND the fact that I feel like such a romantic right now but gah, seriously.
I am totally fawning over Clay right now.
There were a few grammar errors and some awkward phrases, but otherwise, I'm quite pleased with this work in general.
I also like how you didn't try to squeeze in the title into the work unnecessarily, and how it speaks for itself (because trust me, I've seen too many authors try to push their titles into the work).
xx
chocolate and bananas.