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9/29/2010 c12 ethankreizis
AH

I love you. I love your writing. Hooray I've been mentioned! See? My name, right there! See it? I do!

Obviously this chapter has made Lizzy a very happy girl. Duh.

Thanks for updating =D
9/28/2010 c11 ethankreizis
Readinginclass not much fun when I can't review ):

I love love loved this story though! It didn't take too long to read (I am a fast reader if I don't stop on occasion) if this was a book I would buy several copies and read them over and over because I love the story that much.

Please update soon!
9/28/2010 c6 ethankreizis
Another cool chapter. For some reason I have trouble picturing your boys with different faces. Can I get descriptions please? So I can not forget?
9/28/2010 c5 ethankreizis
So... How do I tell you how brilliant this story is? That's right I can't! No words can express what I'm trying to say except I better not get in trouble for reading this in class.

Keep the chapters coming *.*
9/28/2010 c4 ethankreizis
I. Want. Tattoo. Now. *rushes to design studio quickly* I'll show you pictures later! XD
9/28/2010 c3 ethankreizis
*blink blink* holy shit I'm in love! Not just with how this story is progressing but with his character!

Good work =D
9/28/2010 c2 ethankreizis
Ah finally enough time to sit back and read! This story has been on my list for so long but school and work and homeWORK and life have kept me fro it. I do apologize!

But oh, my! I love it! I love this chapter and I will be reading the rest right now!
9/27/2010 c11 ricemidget
AW~~

i hope things clear up!
9/25/2010 c11 CoffeexXxBlood
Aww... This chapter made me cry :( Can't believe that happened.. Can't wait for the next one! . Hahaa
9/23/2010 c10 simone
This is such a genuinely enjoyable story... and I keep snickering at the red running shoes, just waiting for a "are you a friend of Dorothy" joke/reference.

Hope it's all coming along as planned, and that you'll post another chapter soon. Cheers!
9/22/2010 c10 ricemidget
Aw feeding each other only by their mouths.. X3 great addition to the story! i can't wait to read more of your story soon! =D
9/14/2010 c9 CoffeexXxBlood
Hehe yay! :D Chapter was wonderful! Lol
9/14/2010 c9 jayanx
Love the chapter, the line about Peace and love, and only understanding being missing was great. I love the present/past set up, it makes me wonder what happened to bring Jonah to Italy. I have to admit I can see the romance of the idea of the tattoo, but it makes me a bit uneasy it makes me think he's a bit controlling, and maybe because I know people who have been in abusive relationships that the idea of changing a person to you makes me a bit uncomfortable. It's not that I think that Ren wants to hurt him, it's just when you know of people who have been in that situation, and have known people who have lost their lives it's just something you become a bit more sensitive to, maybe a bit too much.

Please don't take this the wrong way, I love your story, and this is in no way meant to be critical of it, it's just something I think about. I will get off of, and take my soap box back now.
9/12/2010 c8 CoffeexXxBlood
Love it! :D
9/1/2010 c7 ricemidget
whoa! that was awesome! =D
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