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11/5/2011 c49 16flamesflyer
It was pretty cute, kinda slow. When Iread that there was a sequel I got pretty excited. Off to read the sequel.
It was pretty cute, kinda slow. When Iread that there was a sequel I got pretty excited. Off to read the sequel.
8/9/2011 c49 5marzmez
I thought this story was sweet! You don't often see stories about shy boys. They are mostly good looking and arrogant. So I liked this especially sinse there are shy boys out there and it's nice to see a story from that perspective.
I thought this story was sweet! You don't often see stories about shy boys. They are mostly good looking and arrogant. So I liked this especially sinse there are shy boys out there and it's nice to see a story from that perspective.
8/6/2011 c3 marzmez
He left his three year old sister home alone while he went running? Bad, bad, bad. Three year olds can get into tremendous trouble.
He left his three year old sister home alone while he went running? Bad, bad, bad. Three year olds can get into tremendous trouble.
7/17/2011 c48 Guest
I like this one and i think you should work on a sequel i would totaly read it
I like this one and i think you should work on a sequel i would totaly read it
6/18/2011 c1 Guest
Really nice! :)
Really nice! :)
3/15/2011 c54 3midnightwrighter
Hi! I just noticed that you hadn't updated in a while and I wanted to know if you are going to continue this story. That's it, if you are please update soon.
-midnightwrighter :)
Hi! I just noticed that you hadn't updated in a while and I wanted to know if you are going to continue this story. That's it, if you are please update soon.
-midnightwrighter :)
2/21/2011 c54 16dail-of-the-air
And the plot heats up .. I love how you switch between everyday happenings (Eunice's girl party) and figuring out the past or the future. Though I must say that it is going a bit slow .. sort of, it heats up, and then there's no follow through, but then something else gets hotter. But I'm sure it'll all pull together eventually! I think it's the short chapter style that throws me off.
And the plot heats up .. I love how you switch between everyday happenings (Eunice's girl party) and figuring out the past or the future. Though I must say that it is going a bit slow .. sort of, it heats up, and then there's no follow through, but then something else gets hotter. But I'm sure it'll all pull together eventually! I think it's the short chapter style that throws me off.
2/18/2011 c54 draco oblivion
Nice chapter. I think it will probably be the brown haired cheerleader who Seth's mum said was smart.
Nice chapter. I think it will probably be the brown haired cheerleader who Seth's mum said was smart.
2/17/2011 c1 Haha.not telling
All I have to say on the ending part is "Oh crap for him." other wise "good ending!" Makes me wanna read more and that's a good thing right? keep up the good work... waiting for more...
All I have to say on the ending part is "Oh crap for him." other wise "good ending!" Makes me wanna read more and that's a good thing right? keep up the good work... waiting for more...
2/17/2011 c54 Hey
I've this happen a few times when you update but you replayed chapter 52 for chapter 54. If you have'nt noticed yet.
I've this happen a few times when you update but you replayed chapter 52 for chapter 54. If you have'nt noticed yet.
2/16/2011 c54 1BehindxThexEyes
That was a really cute chapter...I like how Seth is becoming more outgoing:)
That was a really cute chapter...I like how Seth is becoming more outgoing:)