for In a Hot Tub Under the Moon7/20/2013 c1 
4I. C. Kyeropas
I did not see that coming... I was halfway through thinking that this piece was a detailed but shallow description of a relaxing night... I was so wrong. Great job!
4I. C. KyeropasI did not see that coming... I was halfway through thinking that this piece was a detailed but shallow description of a relaxing night... I was so wrong. Great job!
8/10/2010 c1 12TorgoTheWhite
Wow the story was actually quite poetic despite its ridiculous premise. Very impressively written. Have you hottubbed in open before (sans the bikini, of course).
12TorgoTheWhiteWow the story was actually quite poetic despite its ridiculous premise. Very impressively written. Have you hottubbed in open before (sans the bikini, of course).
8/9/2010 c1 5Alix Cohen
Wow. I don't know what to say.
You created such
an elegant setting, and
then pulled the rug out
from under it. I love when
that's done well, and I really
empathize: don't we
all do crazy things when our
parents aren't home?
Part of us, they shouldn't see.
5Alix CohenWow. I don't know what to say.
You created such
an elegant setting, and
then pulled the rug out
from under it. I love when
that's done well, and I really
empathize: don't we
all do crazy things when our
parents aren't home?
Part of us, they shouldn't see.