for Decadent Chocolate12/22/2013 c1 letthewordsflow-J's
Another flawed character whose imperfections are clearly stated. But maybe it's because of the very detailed but appropriate descriptions, he seemed so faultless.
Again, the writing style is truly amazing. How can one very short scene be written so finely?
This is a sexually provocative one-off story in a hot-ReeechBeeetch way and not an I-don't-know-what-I'm-writing way like the other trying hard non-teen writers. A hot scene that can totally exercise a reader's visual creativity.
Another flawed character whose imperfections are clearly stated. But maybe it's because of the very detailed but appropriate descriptions, he seemed so faultless.
Again, the writing style is truly amazing. How can one very short scene be written so finely?
This is a sexually provocative one-off story in a hot-ReeechBeeetch way and not an I-don't-know-what-I'm-writing way like the other trying hard non-teen writers. A hot scene that can totally exercise a reader's visual creativity.
3/9/2011 c1 Sadie
Yeah... it's good... but uh the point of a one shot is the actual sex dear. This is like half a oneshot. It's incomplete.
Yeah... it's good... but uh the point of a one shot is the actual sex dear. This is like half a oneshot. It's incomplete.
3/5/2011 c1 CrazyInAGoodWay
:) this is like crazy well written :) id love to see how this ends maybe one more chapter? A two-shot instead? Haha
:) this is like crazy well written :) id love to see how this ends maybe one more chapter? A two-shot instead? Haha
9/1/2010 c1 
9SolaceInWords
I really enjoyed how you described him as chocolate. He does sound nummy. ^_^
9SolaceInWordsI really enjoyed how you described him as chocolate. He does sound nummy. ^_^
8/28/2010 c1 sophia
you're filipino. and this was damn sexy.
you're filipino. and this was damn sexy.
8/26/2010 c1 placidmelee
steamy...the power of suggestion in this one is strong...i am getting images and ideas...i usually never entertain :) hm...decadent chocolate is sinful in deed :)
steamy...the power of suggestion in this one is strong...i am getting images and ideas...i usually never entertain :) hm...decadent chocolate is sinful in deed :)