Reviews: Banish | FictionPress

4/22/2011 c1

237classic violet
Absolutely stunning. I love the diction in this. Lovely.

8/26/2010 c1 she smolders
This feels like a thought I always have in the back of mind, I just never could put it down in words as elegantly as you have.

8/20/2010 c1 lymli
it's as if all the words are in the mind and not on paper. cool.

have agreat weekend.

8/16/2010 c1

167nickyO
I'd interpret this to be a personification of an idea that you can't get rid of and you try and write it down and let it go, but still it stays. If I'm way off base, I apologize...but I like it.

Nice work.

8/10/2010 c1

81Princess-anna57
Aw, very good! :) Well done. Keep at it.

~Anna~ ^_^