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6/25/2012 c1 1SamIAm333
"Skyward"

or maybe name it "wings of tears"

or just "wings"
6/4/2012 c1 14AnonymousLily
Maybe "Time to Fly" or "Skyward?" To me it seems to be about a person ending a relationship- because it had changed from bad to good. It seemed very abstract, although I enjoyed the anologies.
6/24/2011 c1 39Sakura163
I don't know what to say about it. It's well written. I enjoyed reading it as for a name I'll get back to you a few popped into my head but I want to reread and make sure I got the jist of the poem
6/24/2011 c1 Sakura163
I don't know what to say about it. It's well written. I enjoyed reading it as for a name I'll get back to you a few popped into my head but I want to reread and make sure I got the jist of the poem
4/9/2011 c1 5Moonlight Mistress
The poem had some wonderful analogies in it. Some of the words you used made it sound beautiful, too. Though it didn't rhyme, it still had this flowing sense to it. Then again, some of the best poems don't rhyme. ;) I loved when you wrote "Only rocky grounds rushing up to break the fall". That line really struck me hard. Good job! Btw, you could name it "Fly" since that is what you're mentioning most and talking about, right? Well, just a suggestion. Loved the poem, really made me think about certain things.

Keep writing!

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