for Darkest Sin8/12/2010 c1 
2Inevitable-Cliche
I really, really like your writing style. You're staying on track and know what you're talking about. The story itself is interesting, too. I hope you'll add more. :)
2Inevitable-ClicheI really, really like your writing style. You're staying on track and know what you're talking about. The story itself is interesting, too. I hope you'll add more. :)
8/12/2010 c1 dakota s
i actually like the name Elaine here! It seems sophisticated or playful depending on how you say it. I can't wait to read about their history, post more soon!
i actually like the name Elaine here! It seems sophisticated or playful depending on how you say it. I can't wait to read about their history, post more soon!
8/11/2010 c1 BORING
BLAH.
BLAH.