for Holy and Hell8/14/2010 c1 
20My Parakeet Has Issues
Oh, very good, though I felt that the flow was interupted in some lines. . . But this wasn't bad. It's obvious that you were VERY uncomfortable.
Keep Writing,
My Parakeet Has Issues
20My Parakeet Has IssuesOh, very good, though I felt that the flow was interupted in some lines. . . But this wasn't bad. It's obvious that you were VERY uncomfortable.
Keep Writing,
My Parakeet Has Issues