for We Are Broken9/15/2010 c6 
2I Will Not Die I Will Survive
Hey, i remembered to review this time :-) aweaome story so far i know its gunna be awesome later on so update soon... Well whenever you can XD
2I Will Not Die I Will SurviveHey, i remembered to review this time :-) aweaome story so far i know its gunna be awesome later on so update soon... Well whenever you can XD
9/14/2010 c6 Da-zGreen
Aw. Poor Ashlynn. I love her. lol. Anywasy, I think Luke is getting soft. lol. Anywasy, thanks for the update, hope you update really soon!
Aw. Poor Ashlynn. I love her. lol. Anywasy, I think Luke is getting soft. lol. Anywasy, thanks for the update, hope you update really soon!
9/13/2010 c6 1Kcoarra
Aw thats kind of sad. I cant wait till they actually start messing with each other.
1KcoarraAw thats kind of sad. I cant wait till they actually start messing with each other.
9/13/2010 c6 2Jimmi J
LOL, I like when Ashlynn slammed him into the lockers. TOTALLY HOT!
anyways... I can't wait til the next chapter.
Love you ho!
No, seriously. I fucking love you Blackmon :) With all of my cold heart ;)
Update soon, yeah?
2Jimmi JLOL, I like when Ashlynn slammed him into the lockers. TOTALLY HOT!
anyways... I can't wait til the next chapter.
Love you ho!
No, seriously. I fucking love you Blackmon :) With all of my cold heart ;)
Update soon, yeah?
9/13/2010 c6 2book-geek
i love this story! feel so bad for ashlynn tho ): that made me really sad in the end
cant wait for more!
2book-geeki love this story! feel so bad for ashlynn tho ): that made me really sad in the end
cant wait for more!
9/9/2010 c5 Ederra
I love where this is going. The characters are great. It really reminds me of another fic - Love Game. Same idea - with two characters who hate each other making a bet to try to make the other one fall in love with them. But I guess you have you're own style too it - which I like.
I love where this is going. The characters are great. It really reminds me of another fic - Love Game. Same idea - with two characters who hate each other making a bet to try to make the other one fall in love with them. But I guess you have you're own style too it - which I like.
9/8/2010 c5 foxyricanlady
great chapter loved the bet part it was so funny cant wait to see whats gonna happen next
great chapter loved the bet part it was so funny cant wait to see whats gonna happen next
9/8/2010 c5 Da-zGreen
Who. That could be fun! lol. Can't wait to see what you got in store for us in the next chapter. Wow, I was wondering what Lucas intentions were. lol. I like Logan's character more. He wasn't all that playboy-ee. lol. But anyways, update soon!
Who. That could be fun! lol. Can't wait to see what you got in store for us in the next chapter. Wow, I was wondering what Lucas intentions were. lol. I like Logan's character more. He wasn't all that playboy-ee. lol. But anyways, update soon!
9/8/2010 c5 2Jimmi J
Ah! Let the games begin ;)
I love Lucas :) He's so dreamy.
He's fuckable in my book :P
Good job kiddo ;) lol
2Jimmi JAh! Let the games begin ;)
I love Lucas :) He's so dreamy.
He's fuckable in my book :P
Good job kiddo ;) lol
9/1/2010 c4 Da-zGreen
Hahahaha, Lucas is just to damn funny lol. Please tell Jimmi I said happy birthday also. She doesn't know me but I read her stories. lol. Well update soon!
Hahahaha, Lucas is just to damn funny lol. Please tell Jimmi I said happy birthday also. She doesn't know me but I read her stories. lol. Well update soon!
9/1/2010 c4 foxyricanlady
great chapter hope you update soon. and hope your friend has a great birthday
great chapter hope you update soon. and hope your friend has a great birthday