for Alison's Lullaby2/25/2013 c4 Guest
Why aren't there more reviews? I really enjoyed reading the story.
The characters were unique and I liked them both a lot. I'm glad they got their happy end. I think when Levon was gone and Cameron raised Alison alone, he became a lot more mature and he just seemed to have become strong. I also really liked that the story mainly revolved around Levon, Cameron and and Alison, but you didn't leave out any important details.
You probably won't write an epilogue anymore, but that's totally fine. In my opinion, the ending was perfect. I enjoyed reading the story and I could feel with the characters while reading it. Their emotions and behaviour seemed so realistic to me.
Why aren't there more reviews? I really enjoyed reading the story.
The characters were unique and I liked them both a lot. I'm glad they got their happy end. I think when Levon was gone and Cameron raised Alison alone, he became a lot more mature and he just seemed to have become strong. I also really liked that the story mainly revolved around Levon, Cameron and and Alison, but you didn't leave out any important details.
You probably won't write an epilogue anymore, but that's totally fine. In my opinion, the ending was perfect. I enjoyed reading the story and I could feel with the characters while reading it. Their emotions and behaviour seemed so realistic to me.
5/20/2012 c2 carolincacao-leo-lao
this is so sad-ish and sweet and cute! [and funny] I love it! nice cliffhanger at the end of the chapter, too. . Chapter 3: chapter two or bust! :D
this is so sad-ish and sweet and cute! [and funny] I love it! nice cliffhanger at the end of the chapter, too. . Chapter 3: chapter two or bust! :D
5/20/2012 c1 carolincacao-leo-lao
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaang...
You have a great way with words! . This really good. I'm gonna go straight to Chapter 2: chapter one! :D
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaang...
You have a great way with words! . This really good. I'm gonna go straight to Chapter 2: chapter one! :D
5/10/2012 c4 jane
great!
great!
5/5/2012 c4 morexforxme
Ooooooh, this is so good! But I do wish it were a bit longer – I'd love to know what their life as a family is like.
Ooooooh, this is so good! But I do wish it were a bit longer – I'd love to know what their life as a family is like.
5/5/2012 c4 
2Goldenstars
I liked that it was just a story about their relationship between the two of them. There were complications but not in the form of other people causing problems. It was rational, believable and refreshing for a story that started in a high school situation, and all around.
You conveyed the difference between age after the five year jump really well, and for a story that lasted four chapters it didn't feel rushed (and the lovely long chapters), your writing style flows and generally I really enjoyed this. Good job.
2GoldenstarsI liked that it was just a story about their relationship between the two of them. There were complications but not in the form of other people causing problems. It was rational, believable and refreshing for a story that started in a high school situation, and all around.
You conveyed the difference between age after the five year jump really well, and for a story that lasted four chapters it didn't feel rushed (and the lovely long chapters), your writing style flows and generally I really enjoyed this. Good job.
5/4/2012 c4 S.H. Marr
Aww, this was so darn cute! Like, I don't even know what else to say. They both took way too long to get to this point?
Aww, this was so darn cute! Like, I don't even know what else to say. They both took way too long to get to this point?
1/2/2012 c3 Starcrazed
Love it~! Alison is sooo adorable, I Hope everything goes well for Cam And Lev
Love it~! Alison is sooo adorable, I Hope everything goes well for Cam And Lev
12/21/2010 c1 marshmallow7
okay, so it's been a while since you updated on this story, and i admit i'm one of those people who only right a review if the story literally agitates my soul with curiosity, so please please please finish. i really like this story and i want the angst and the happy ending. probably not my place, but please continue this story...like a christmas present. *_*
okay, so it's been a while since you updated on this story, and i admit i'm one of those people who only right a review if the story literally agitates my soul with curiosity, so please please please finish. i really like this story and i want the angst and the happy ending. probably not my place, but please continue this story...like a christmas present. *_*
8/27/2010 c1 4Fiery Dancer
not sure i agree with keeping the kid :) but a very sweet story and i hope you continue it!
4Fiery Dancernot sure i agree with keeping the kid :) but a very sweet story and i hope you continue it!
8/16/2010 c1 Poptart Guava King
Oh my goodness. I love this so much. I can't wait for the next bit. Please continue it. please.
Oh my goodness. I love this so much. I can't wait for the next bit. Please continue it. please.