for Five More Minutes11/28/2012 c1 
19Alaeryel
Slaaty-oh how I enjoyed this this chapter-one by the way you wrote the person talking I figured it to be a girl-I was pleasantly surprised! Also your writing was well structured and the humor flawless! As it has probably been so long I am assuming there will be no more of this story and that saddens me. The interaction between the young man and the girl was quite exceptional too-couldn't help but giggle over it! I wish I had found this site a long time ago but it has only been about 2 months. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story!
19AlaeryelSlaaty-oh how I enjoyed this this chapter-one by the way you wrote the person talking I figured it to be a girl-I was pleasantly surprised! Also your writing was well structured and the humor flawless! As it has probably been so long I am assuming there will be no more of this story and that saddens me. The interaction between the young man and the girl was quite exceptional too-couldn't help but giggle over it! I wish I had found this site a long time ago but it has only been about 2 months. Anyway, I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story!
8/23/2010 c1 derya
ok let me just say cudos for the great start...i could not stop laughing at the end Wendy is priceless...keep it up cant wait to read more
ok let me just say cudos for the great start...i could not stop laughing at the end Wendy is priceless...keep it up cant wait to read more
8/18/2010 c1 Stretch19
Can't believe he was waiting to get into a library, I thought he was waiting for a game release or something and then he's rushing for a private study room. That had me laughing out loud as i realised how wrong i was. Wendy's information was completely random but i bet those facts are gonna stick in my head. Great start to your story can't wait to read more, especially from your summary, that's what drew me in the most. Keep writing!
Can't believe he was waiting to get into a library, I thought he was waiting for a game release or something and then he's rushing for a private study room. That had me laughing out loud as i realised how wrong i was. Wendy's information was completely random but i bet those facts are gonna stick in my head. Great start to your story can't wait to read more, especially from your summary, that's what drew me in the most. Keep writing!