
2/25/2016 c21
1Du
Aw, this was so sweet! Yup, I binge read it. Your writing is seriously outstanding. At times I could tell this was one of your earliest works, because I noticed a few grammar errors - but they are minor details. The story itself was flawless, it was enthralling. I really loved it, and as always, it was unique. Thank you for sharing :)

Aw, this was so sweet! Yup, I binge read it. Your writing is seriously outstanding. At times I could tell this was one of your earliest works, because I noticed a few grammar errors - but they are minor details. The story itself was flawless, it was enthralling. I really loved it, and as always, it was unique. Thank you for sharing :)
1/26/2015 c21
7TheHungryCaterpillar
This was awesome to read, it pulled me along so well. You're a great writer. Off to the sequel :D

This was awesome to read, it pulled me along so well. You're a great writer. Off to the sequel :D
3/31/2014 c21 Sarah
Thank you so much for your stories! Keep up the good work! Whenever I read your stories, I feel everything. Your style of writing is so real. I feel connected to the characters. Once I finished this story, I had a "literature hangover". Haha I kept thinking about it and I'm pretty sure it's gonna hinder my future prospects of choosing a man, because now I'm gonna be looking for my very own David Grant :))
Thank you so much for your stories! Keep up the good work! Whenever I read your stories, I feel everything. Your style of writing is so real. I feel connected to the characters. Once I finished this story, I had a "literature hangover". Haha I kept thinking about it and I'm pretty sure it's gonna hinder my future prospects of choosing a man, because now I'm gonna be looking for my very own David Grant :))
9/2/2011 c5 Ree
'I wouldn't joke about Jeremy Kyle.'
That line was chuffing hilarious.
'It's not his baby.' Oh gosh, I love this!
'I wouldn't joke about Jeremy Kyle.'
That line was chuffing hilarious.
'It's not his baby.' Oh gosh, I love this!
8/9/2011 c21 MyStache
I love the characters and plot, especially the plot! It's very heart-warming and makes me feel all giddy inside. However, there are some grammatical errors- but I don't really mind those.
Anyways- I love it! I look forward to reading your other stories! (:
I love the characters and plot, especially the plot! It's very heart-warming and makes me feel all giddy inside. However, there are some grammatical errors- but I don't really mind those.
Anyways- I love it! I look forward to reading your other stories! (:
7/15/2011 c21 witeaya
i love how well written the story is. i dont know grammar wise cause im not that good with that but characters wise and plot wise the story is beautiful.
did mike really cheat on her? he loved her so much before. it kinda hard for me to accept that cause she was the last thought before he fell into a coma. i just wish he being a cheater was not in the story. oh,that's how silly i am.
but he was being mean the second time he came to amber's house.
i never really like emotional-sobbing guys but david will not be david if he's not like. but the suicide tendencies did worry me a bit. how can amber not even had a lil bit of worry about that?it were a few suicide attempts,rite? no minor thing.
i put the sequel on my alert. hope u will continue on writing great stories.
i love how well written the story is. i dont know grammar wise cause im not that good with that but characters wise and plot wise the story is beautiful.
did mike really cheat on her? he loved her so much before. it kinda hard for me to accept that cause she was the last thought before he fell into a coma. i just wish he being a cheater was not in the story. oh,that's how silly i am.
but he was being mean the second time he came to amber's house.
i never really like emotional-sobbing guys but david will not be david if he's not like. but the suicide tendencies did worry me a bit. how can amber not even had a lil bit of worry about that?it were a few suicide attempts,rite? no minor thing.
i put the sequel on my alert. hope u will continue on writing great stories.
7/15/2011 c8 witeaya
i love the story so far.interesting plot.
i felt sorry for mike tho.he loved amber so very much.
i love the story so far.interesting plot.
i felt sorry for mike tho.he loved amber so very much.
6/29/2011 c17 gulistala
What an ass. Shouldn't he have at least openly apologised? He accused her of something she did not do, treated her unfairly when she gave him no reason. Sure he thought that she chose Mike but it still doesn't matter.
What an ass. Shouldn't he have at least openly apologised? He accused her of something she did not do, treated her unfairly when she gave him no reason. Sure he thought that she chose Mike but it still doesn't matter.
6/29/2011 c15 gulistala
Oh but it's not entirely Mike's fault that he's acting the way he is. He's just remembered everything, of course he's going to act like that. But I guess it isn't Amber's fault either. Sighs, really complicated. And I wonder if David'll believe Amber when she tells him she feels nothing for Mike. Oh dear.
Oh but it's not entirely Mike's fault that he's acting the way he is. He's just remembered everything, of course he's going to act like that. But I guess it isn't Amber's fault either. Sighs, really complicated. And I wonder if David'll believe Amber when she tells him she feels nothing for Mike. Oh dear.
6/29/2011 c8 gulistala
It's a good and bad thing? Good because she's moving on, bad because there might be a chance that she still hasn't sorted everything out with Mike that she's not ready to move on. Hmm. All that aside, loving the development between David and Amber.
It's a good and bad thing? Good because she's moving on, bad because there might be a chance that she still hasn't sorted everything out with Mike that she's not ready to move on. Hmm. All that aside, loving the development between David and Amber.
6/29/2011 c7 gulistala
No how could he have been cheating on her when he had been planning to propose? Although Tanya did just turn up randomly...but still. Oh dear.
No how could he have been cheating on her when he had been planning to propose? Although Tanya did just turn up randomly...but still. Oh dear.