
4/1/2011 c21 uniquely-unique
Se! what I'd tell you?
I read the whole thing!
Aren't you proud of me?
Yeah, I was gonna review each chapter... but... I couldn't stop reading.
Sorry.
You're just to good of an author.
Right, the story.
That was such an adorable ending!
I luffed it!
And I'm so happy they had a baby.
Becuase babies make everything better.
And I hate mike!
Okay, okay I do feel just a little eensy weensy bit if pity for him.
But still!
He cheated on Amber!
Overall it was a genuinley fantastic story.
Now I'm off to read your next story!
☺uniquely-unique☻
Se! what I'd tell you?
I read the whole thing!
Aren't you proud of me?
Yeah, I was gonna review each chapter... but... I couldn't stop reading.
Sorry.
You're just to good of an author.
Right, the story.
That was such an adorable ending!
I luffed it!
And I'm so happy they had a baby.
Becuase babies make everything better.
And I hate mike!
Okay, okay I do feel just a little eensy weensy bit if pity for him.
But still!
He cheated on Amber!
Overall it was a genuinley fantastic story.
Now I'm off to read your next story!
☺uniquely-unique☻
3/31/2011 c2 uniquely-unique
Oh my goodness!
I'm so excited becuase I realized this is amber's story!
And then I looked at the clock and I'm like, "shoot It's bedtime."
Alas I will be with you again tomorrow to indulge in your amazing stories.
But for now I must depart to bed.
Farewell.
☺uniquely-unique☻
Oh my goodness!
I'm so excited becuase I realized this is amber's story!
And then I looked at the clock and I'm like, "shoot It's bedtime."
Alas I will be with you again tomorrow to indulge in your amazing stories.
But for now I must depart to bed.
Farewell.
☺uniquely-unique☻
11/18/2010 c21 Randomoscityy
Normally, I don't review... Actually I don't really review at all, but this story... It's magnificent, breathtaking, beautiful. I've never felt so attached, felt so emotionally connected like this before. With your words I was able to place myself exactly where they were, feel what they felt. I expect that my friends now think I'm crazy... haha I'd be grinning like a fool one moment, and bawling my eyes out the next. Just please don't stop writing...if you can evoke this kind of emotion in a person, especially a person like me, who trys to deny any emotion at all costs. You've really got talent, talent that could get you far in life, farther than I think even you have imagined for yourself.
Normally, I don't review... Actually I don't really review at all, but this story... It's magnificent, breathtaking, beautiful. I've never felt so attached, felt so emotionally connected like this before. With your words I was able to place myself exactly where they were, feel what they felt. I expect that my friends now think I'm crazy... haha I'd be grinning like a fool one moment, and bawling my eyes out the next. Just please don't stop writing...if you can evoke this kind of emotion in a person, especially a person like me, who trys to deny any emotion at all costs. You've really got talent, talent that could get you far in life, farther than I think even you have imagined for yourself.
11/13/2010 c20 Guest
Absolutely stunning, Perfect really.
Absolutely stunning, Perfect really.
10/20/2010 c18 Greatest.Threat
Loved it. It would be nice if they had a happy ending, Im a sucker for those. David sounds like the perfect dream guy...
Happy ending please!
Loved it. It would be nice if they had a happy ending, Im a sucker for those. David sounds like the perfect dream guy...
Happy ending please!
10/16/2010 c18 sw33tdaisie
truthfully i think the both of them have gone through enough - so a happy ending...i mean you still have amber's parents reaction and what they are going to do with their future and i don't know how long this will be but...it's shouldn't be sad anymore - difficult is fine but not sad...thanks for the update :)
truthfully i think the both of them have gone through enough - so a happy ending...i mean you still have amber's parents reaction and what they are going to do with their future and i don't know how long this will be but...it's shouldn't be sad anymore - difficult is fine but not sad...thanks for the update :)
10/16/2010 c18
1eliza-smiles
Who doesn't want a happy ending? Haha, but seriously, haven't David and Amber been through enough? I will be happy either way though because you have a way with words that makes the plot make sense - if you get what I mean. But nice chapter, I love the interaction between these two.

Who doesn't want a happy ending? Haha, but seriously, haven't David and Amber been through enough? I will be happy either way though because you have a way with words that makes the plot make sense - if you get what I mean. But nice chapter, I love the interaction between these two.
9/26/2010 c17
1eliza-smiles
As I am writing this my heart is slowing moving back down into it's rightful place... Haha, wow I was totally shocked with the opening paragraph, I had to go and reread the previous chapter! I am glad that they are back together, it would seem wrong to do otherwise. Yay!

As I am writing this my heart is slowing moving back down into it's rightful place... Haha, wow I was totally shocked with the opening paragraph, I had to go and reread the previous chapter! I am glad that they are back together, it would seem wrong to do otherwise. Yay!
9/26/2010 c17 Aya Marie Love
oh goodness, I was scared for a moment there. You were almost too mean, although if you had killed him it might have been a tragic love story. I am so very glad that you let him live
oh goodness, I was scared for a moment there. You were almost too mean, although if you had killed him it might have been a tragic love story. I am so very glad that you let him live
9/26/2010 c17 simplyme
yay! you updated :)
Aww they're back together how cute!
yay! you updated :)
Aww they're back together how cute!
9/19/2010 c16 Chrisi
Oh geez...leaving us with a cliffy...I hope he doesn't do anything stupid...how we jump to conclusions.
Oh geez...leaving us with a cliffy...I hope he doesn't do anything stupid...how we jump to conclusions.
9/19/2010 c16 simplyme
Loving the story so far! I stayed up all night just to read all of the chappies, keep up the great work!
Loving the story so far! I stayed up all night just to read all of the chappies, keep up the great work!
9/19/2010 c16 Aya Marie Love
NO! absolutely NOT! If he hangs himself I will cry! I really don't want to cry!
NO! absolutely NOT! If he hangs himself I will cry! I really don't want to cry!