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for to sleep beside you

1/12/2011 c1 melissa
this is beautiful
11/28/2010 c1 612simpleplan13
I really liked the format of the piece. Starting and ending with those two lines worked well to remind us that the middle part really was just a dream and not a reality.

I also liked the piece itself. Your descriptions were really beautiful and well done. I especially liked the part about his warmth going through you. That was a powerful image. Really well done.

PS Check out the Review Game and/or it's Review Marathon (links in my profile!)

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