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11/28/2010 c1 612simpleplan13
I like the idea of the cockroaches because its so absurd, but at the same time I appreciated it because I am a big person. The only thing is about them passing on... I kinda thought they lived forever. I also thought "maybe if she finished her dreams back in high school..." was odd because her dreams wouldn't have been finished in high school if she wanted to go to college which it seemed like she did.

The rest of the piece was good. I could see her in her home doing this and I could also feel for her. The last line was really powerful and unexpected.

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