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9/6/2010 c1 30YasuRan
Nice. Reminds me of that swift sense of power described in those epic fantasy novels. Well, to the hero, at least :)

Plus, I thought the line about the little dipper was mighty adorable.
9/4/2010 c1 612simpleplan13
I didn't like the repetition of I looked ahead. It didn't make sense to me.

Other than that I really liked the piece. All the mention of the constellations worked really well for me. I also liked the flow here with phrases that continued onto the next line like i am stronger and free. Great ending as well.

PS The Review Game's Review Marathon is this weekend. Check it out! (Link in my profile)

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