for les étoiles9/6/2010 c1 
30YasuRan
Nice. Reminds me of that swift sense of power described in those epic fantasy novels. Well, to the hero, at least :)
Plus, I thought the line about the little dipper was mighty adorable.
30YasuRanNice. Reminds me of that swift sense of power described in those epic fantasy novels. Well, to the hero, at least :)
Plus, I thought the line about the little dipper was mighty adorable.
9/4/2010 c1 612simpleplan13
I didn't like the repetition of I looked ahead. It didn't make sense to me.
Other than that I really liked the piece. All the mention of the constellations worked really well for me. I also liked the flow here with phrases that continued onto the next line like i am stronger and free. Great ending as well.
PS The Review Game's Review Marathon is this weekend. Check it out! (Link in my profile)
612simpleplan13I didn't like the repetition of I looked ahead. It didn't make sense to me.
Other than that I really liked the piece. All the mention of the constellations worked really well for me. I also liked the flow here with phrases that continued onto the next line like i am stronger and free. Great ending as well.
PS The Review Game's Review Marathon is this weekend. Check it out! (Link in my profile)