for 3,698,424th Kiss10/8/2014 c11 ssjn4vega
What a great story, quite an entertaining take on sleeping beauty, i will definitely continue to read it in the future.
What a great story, quite an entertaining take on sleeping beauty, i will definitely continue to read it in the future.
9/15/2014 c1 Guest
I am loving this story. Please please please continue it. I am dying to know what happens next. :)
I am loving this story. Please please please continue it. I am dying to know what happens next. :)
9/15/2014 c1 
2InspiredAndNatural
It's great, but how hideous to experience 3 million kisses by different princes. I suppose a midget or an ogre tried to wake her up, just for amusement. Can't wait to get my head straight on this Sleeping Beauty story I wanna write!
2InspiredAndNaturalIt's great, but how hideous to experience 3 million kisses by different princes. I suppose a midget or an ogre tried to wake her up, just for amusement. Can't wait to get my head straight on this Sleeping Beauty story I wanna write!
8/24/2013 c11 4AutumnLeavesInTheAir
I love this story. It is a fairy tale with a twist and a story of finding one's true love rolled into one, making it perfect! Please continue it, I love your writing style and I can't wait for more! :)
4AutumnLeavesInTheAirI love this story. It is a fairy tale with a twist and a story of finding one's true love rolled into one, making it perfect! Please continue it, I love your writing style and I can't wait for more! :)
7/13/2013 c11 3Tylis
I had fun reading your story! The village seems really cute and fun to live in, with the exception of the soldiers, of course!
3TylisI had fun reading your story! The village seems really cute and fun to live in, with the exception of the soldiers, of course!
3/19/2013 c10 Ppeppermint
AHH! I love this story!
I wonder who is the green eyed guy and how will he be involved with Lilliana. Keep up the good work. :)
AHH! I love this story!
I wonder who is the green eyed guy and how will he be involved with Lilliana. Keep up the good work. :)
3/15/2013 c9 5Shadows of Dakaron
This is a very interesting take on the story. I love the little links to the original in such small ways, like the sisters and their color preferences. The prologue and first chapter were already intriguing, but as I kept reading I kept getting more hooked. I look forward to reading more when you get the rest of the story up.
5Shadows of DakaronThis is a very interesting take on the story. I love the little links to the original in such small ways, like the sisters and their color preferences. The prologue and first chapter were already intriguing, but as I kept reading I kept getting more hooked. I look forward to reading more when you get the rest of the story up.
3/14/2013 c9 Guest
Interesting concept, though it could really benefit from better editing and more care where character personalities are concerned.
I didn't care for the hourglass comments because they seemed too much like a personal agenda being championed. I also wish Bianca had more to her personality than just "stereotypical evil bitch" because as is, she is flat and unrealistic. Why not have Lilliana feel jealous of Bianca? Too often in fantasy stories the protagonist is portrayed as this special snowflake who everyone loves unconditionally, except for the antagonist, who hates them unconditionally. At least if Bianca is to be the antagonist, making her reach that position should be realistic, such as if she befriended Lilliana and then later they had a falling out.
I do like this story though. I'm curious what Lilianna will do with her life now that she is awake.
Interesting concept, though it could really benefit from better editing and more care where character personalities are concerned.
I didn't care for the hourglass comments because they seemed too much like a personal agenda being championed. I also wish Bianca had more to her personality than just "stereotypical evil bitch" because as is, she is flat and unrealistic. Why not have Lilliana feel jealous of Bianca? Too often in fantasy stories the protagonist is portrayed as this special snowflake who everyone loves unconditionally, except for the antagonist, who hates them unconditionally. At least if Bianca is to be the antagonist, making her reach that position should be realistic, such as if she befriended Lilliana and then later they had a falling out.
I do like this story though. I'm curious what Lilianna will do with her life now that she is awake.
3/14/2013 c9 1Mimzyfire
Thank you! Great chapter, i loved the stall holder and I LOVE ROSE! nice little twist saying that they are twins. Very good. Again thank you for the chapter
1MimzyfireThank you! Great chapter, i loved the stall holder and I LOVE ROSE! nice little twist saying that they are twins. Very good. Again thank you for the chapter
3/2/2013 c8 bunch-of-white-roses
Ooh, I'm very interested to see where this whole thing with her mother's necklace is going... keep up the good work!
And just so you know, I didn't notice any mixed up you're and yours this chapter :)
Ooh, I'm very interested to see where this whole thing with her mother's necklace is going... keep up the good work!
And just so you know, I didn't notice any mixed up you're and yours this chapter :)
2/27/2013 c8 4fufuroo13
This is such a cute story! I also really like the contrast Bianca brings, being so evil and such.
I'd also like to see more of Hazal. I mean, I feel bad for him having to be engaged to Bianca, but I'm not sure if I actually like him as a character yet. He did almost leave her in that tower ;) And what was he doing there in the first place?!
Haha, I have so many questions, please update soon!
4fufuroo13This is such a cute story! I also really like the contrast Bianca brings, being so evil and such.
I'd also like to see more of Hazal. I mean, I feel bad for him having to be engaged to Bianca, but I'm not sure if I actually like him as a character yet. He did almost leave her in that tower ;) And what was he doing there in the first place?!
Haha, I have so many questions, please update soon!
2/26/2013 c7 2Jerim
Please continue this. I love the way you write it, including all the characters so far. The story is so interesting, I read the first chapter and just couldn't stop. so please please please continue. :D
2JerimPlease continue this. I love the way you write it, including all the characters so far. The story is so interesting, I read the first chapter and just couldn't stop. so please please please continue. :D
2/26/2013 c7 1Mimzyfire
This story has the making of something great! Its really good. I like how its like a twist of the orginal fairytale. Please keep updating, i love this story. Keep it up you're doing great!
:D
1MimzyfireThis story has the making of something great! Its really good. I like how its like a twist of the orginal fairytale. Please keep updating, i love this story. Keep it up you're doing great!
:D
2/26/2013 c7 bunch-of-white-roses
Yay! I'd forgotten about this story, but I was so happy to see the email that said there was a new chapter. I've just re-read the whole thing and I must say, your writing has definetely improved since the last chapter (though I noticed you've used the wrong your/you're a few times). I love where the story is going, and the whole concept is awesome (especially the spell gone wrong). I look forward to the next update!
Yay! I'd forgotten about this story, but I was so happy to see the email that said there was a new chapter. I've just re-read the whole thing and I must say, your writing has definetely improved since the last chapter (though I noticed you've used the wrong your/you're a few times). I love where the story is going, and the whole concept is awesome (especially the spell gone wrong). I look forward to the next update!