
1/10/2014 c17 The Nameless
Great story you have here! Keep up the good work! D
Great story you have here! Keep up the good work! D
9/2/2012 c10 Miles Montgomery
The more I read, the more I'm sucked in. You should publish this, really.
The more I read, the more I'm sucked in. You should publish this, really.
9/2/2012 c6 Miles Montgomery
That was some tough training. I like the ghost mother, it's like an Obi-wan thing.
That was some tough training. I like the ghost mother, it's like an Obi-wan thing.
9/2/2012 c5 Miles Montgomery
That sounds like a lot of land. And I wonder what's up with the Touketsu-Hara?
That sounds like a lot of land. And I wonder what's up with the Touketsu-Hara?
4/23/2012 c1
1Ram Attra
I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!
man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.
and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)
Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

I love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!
man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.
and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)
Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!