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8/24/2010 c1 Klakkaros
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, it was engaging, engrossing and emotional. My only issue was that i found it somewhat predictable, but that's because i've read a similar story before, and i can't use that to fault your work. The apparent predictability of the story takes away nothing.

Keep it up.

Klakkaros

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