for Art Criticism11/16/2010 c20 
23plumblossom
It damn well can't be this easy for Turkish to make the switch in his photography. That's unfair!
Meanwhile, our guy needs a break too . . .
23plumblossomIt damn well can't be this easy for Turkish to make the switch in his photography. That's unfair!
Meanwhile, our guy needs a break too . . .
11/16/2010 c20 firedraygon97
Oh this is just fantastic. I love how James is slowly learning to let loose and enjoy having Turkish around. These two are so cute together! Lovely work. Please write more soon!
~fd97
Oh this is just fantastic. I love how James is slowly learning to let loose and enjoy having Turkish around. These two are so cute together! Lovely work. Please write more soon!
~fd97
11/16/2010 c20 hexyz
They haven't discussed whether they were together together and not just sort of together? I thought the whole going to New York thing settled that. :/ I wonder what argument James will make.
Also, I found the first part of this chapter quite profound. The whole we live in our bodies bit was quite good.
They haven't discussed whether they were together together and not just sort of together? I thought the whole going to New York thing settled that. :/ I wonder what argument James will make.
Also, I found the first part of this chapter quite profound. The whole we live in our bodies bit was quite good.
11/16/2010 c20 EndeavorThroughTheMist
For about a minute I was worried that James was gonna freak when Turkish called him his boyfriend, but I've come to the conclusion that I think he's actually going to be flattered. Which probably means good times for the two of them in the next chapter. Hahaha. I love this story. I have to admit I was getting a little worried by your absence! Not that it was even long (look what you've done...I'm addicted to your stories). I think excited Turkish is adorable (as is Turkish is every mood, but that's beside the point). Mad love for everything about this, especially, if I might add, Swallowed by the Whale web comic! That's such exciting news! I checked out the pictures and they look awesome. Good to know there's more great stuff on the way!
For about a minute I was worried that James was gonna freak when Turkish called him his boyfriend, but I've come to the conclusion that I think he's actually going to be flattered. Which probably means good times for the two of them in the next chapter. Hahaha. I love this story. I have to admit I was getting a little worried by your absence! Not that it was even long (look what you've done...I'm addicted to your stories). I think excited Turkish is adorable (as is Turkish is every mood, but that's beside the point). Mad love for everything about this, especially, if I might add, Swallowed by the Whale web comic! That's such exciting news! I checked out the pictures and they look awesome. Good to know there's more great stuff on the way!
11/16/2010 c10 chromalux
I LOVE this story! I picture James looking like an older version The Brain from Brick.
I LOVE this story! I picture James looking like an older version The Brain from Brick.
11/15/2010 c19 ohmytuesday
AHAHAHA James is so adorable. I love him and I think Turkish is a saint for putting up with his (adorable) nonsense.
Awesomeness is awesome
AHAHAHA James is so adorable. I love him and I think Turkish is a saint for putting up with his (adorable) nonsense.
Awesomeness is awesome
11/7/2010 c19 Sarah
Oh, I absolutely adore this. Good characterization, good writing (which isn't so common on FP, to be honest).
Keep writing~ I eagerly await more.
Oh, I absolutely adore this. Good characterization, good writing (which isn't so common on FP, to be honest).
Keep writing~ I eagerly await more.
11/5/2010 c19 EndeavorThroughTheMist
Your frequent updates make my life. As does this story. Just so you know.
Your frequent updates make my life. As does this story. Just so you know.
11/5/2010 c19 5Nightengale101
WOW! I love ur stories. Ur such a great writer and all ur characters are genuine and have unique personalities. Even the plot kicks butt! Continue writing and posting! :)
5Nightengale101WOW! I love ur stories. Ur such a great writer and all ur characters are genuine and have unique personalities. Even the plot kicks butt! Continue writing and posting! :)
11/5/2010 c19 54big.break.and.laryngitis
This story makes me love life just a little bit more every time I read a chapter. It's just. So. Guh. There are no words.
54big.break.and.laryngitisThis story makes me love life just a little bit more every time I read a chapter. It's just. So. Guh. There are no words.
11/4/2010 c19 25Esquirella
I really, really love this story! I can't believe there's only four more chapters! These two are one of my most favorite couples!
I love the way James lets go when he's with Turkish,too. You can just feel the strong feelings he has for Turkish. Is he going to admit to it?
25EsquirellaI really, really love this story! I can't believe there's only four more chapters! These two are one of my most favorite couples!
I love the way James lets go when he's with Turkish,too. You can just feel the strong feelings he has for Turkish. Is he going to admit to it?
11/4/2010 c19 23plumblossom
You sure make me miss San Francisco. Lucky me I'm going in a couple weeks.
But I'm not going to _this_ San Francisco: a much staider one. Which is okay.
Turkish is so sweet.
23plumblossomYou sure make me miss San Francisco. Lucky me I'm going in a couple weeks.
But I'm not going to _this_ San Francisco: a much staider one. Which is okay.
Turkish is so sweet.
11/4/2010 c19 Poptart Guava King
D: fingered him. OMG OUR LITTLE BABY IS GROWING UP. Oh yes I do hope I know what New York means. And every trip I make to NY will never be the same. BWAHAHAHAH.
D: fingered him. OMG OUR LITTLE BABY IS GROWING UP. Oh yes I do hope I know what New York means. And every trip I make to NY will never be the same. BWAHAHAHAH.
11/1/2010 c18 vanillacreampuff
You know, this story really kinda rocks dude (: Sadly you have destroyed any chance of me doing well in my classes tomorrow but it was totally worth it to read this instead. I feel like I'm a sorta James character so I get where he's coming from a lot and it just makes me happy that's he's got a hot guy who can cook (because food is obviously the most important thing!). Originally, I thought Peter was gay too and there was gonna be a shock twist of Peter and James getting it on - the sheer horror that went through me at that was actually pretty ridiculous but it turned out okay. I need to go read your other stories if this is any indication of your awesomeness, but maybe tomorrow when sleep is less necessary. (:
You know, this story really kinda rocks dude (: Sadly you have destroyed any chance of me doing well in my classes tomorrow but it was totally worth it to read this instead. I feel like I'm a sorta James character so I get where he's coming from a lot and it just makes me happy that's he's got a hot guy who can cook (because food is obviously the most important thing!). Originally, I thought Peter was gay too and there was gonna be a shock twist of Peter and James getting it on - the sheer horror that went through me at that was actually pretty ridiculous but it turned out okay. I need to go read your other stories if this is any indication of your awesomeness, but maybe tomorrow when sleep is less necessary. (: